|Reviews for Sunshine|
| Eden chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
I love bittersweet, heartwarming and stories that bring me to tears. Just like this one, da?
| AliceGoBoom chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
I can't stop crying ;-;
This was perfect, lovit!
| NotaPunk chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
You did a fantastic job!
| captain con queso chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
Aw, Liet singing to Russia is so adorable. I never knew there was more to the song than that one verse, but all of it fits them. Oh, and I loved the verse you made up. I can totally imagine Russia singing something along those lines. :)
Very nice work!
| I Spaz With Pizzazz chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
i very much like this fic. :3 especially ivan's fragile innocence... ah, and the ending verse you wrote fit along wonderfully. it's a lovely fic.
| serawingthwitty.com chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
Uwahh ;-; h-how sad! Lithuania, be one with Russia again
As for the last verse, it actually did stand out a bit when I was humming it. some of the syllables don't match up. It still sounds okay when singing it, except the third line
we'll stay forever
in the sunshine
I think that second bit needs another syllable? but lyrically it fits in perfectly, very well done.
(Ah, wouldn't it be amazing if Russia's voice actor sang this?)
| iTrippedandfellforyou chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
Woah, you wrote those last lyrics? They were awesome, fit right in, I thought they were actually part of the song :D I really loved this, it's awesome. And well, I've always loved this song C: The only suggestion I would make would be to have the lines not centered. The lyrics are fine that way, I just think the story parts should be on the left. My eyes got used to it tho _
I really loved this, especially the ending, although it made me sad. I hope to see more writing from you!