Reviews for Raped by the devil with the bushy eyebrows
Goth Albino Angel chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
This was... strange and weird and heartbreaking (sort of), but most of all, it was infuriating more than anything else, I wanted to rip Edward's head off (not that I didn't already want to... stupid brooding, sisy assed fairy). You did good. Nice.
vampire messenger chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
finally edward has died. huzzah lets have a celebration. i always did hate that prick. fuck awesome story especially the end.
Christie chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
Interesting story, it definitely had potential but.. For some reason I find myself intensely disliking any story that hate on Charlie.

Hint: I'm going to rant now.

A) Charlie did NOT leave Bella; Bella and her mother left him.

B) He took her in when he didn't have to - After being abandoned, why should he have?

C) He tries his hardest to be a good dad in the books and never holds anything against her, even though she treats him poorly half the time.

D) He obviously cares about her a lot, he just isn't very good at showing his emotions.

So please, tell me.. Why do so many fanfics put him in such a bad light? :( I get that it's an AU.. but poor, poor Charlie.. *cries*

Anyways, keep practicing. :) Not a bad story at all.
bleach number 1 fan chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
erm very strange lol i liked the ending were alice saves her and edward dies :D
xxWalkingDisasterxx chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Badass. ;D
Alma chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
a total pointless review towards the story for its more a review to you...your cute darlin'
Echoes-of-Dreams chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
Mouthwash...oh jeez...

Anyways, about this little one-shot, great job, and I now have a new song to look up, so its all good.

I hate Edward all the more now, so thanks for making my dark hatred grow! Woo!

Keep up the good work!
Kai-chan14 chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
Ah! That bastard! D: He...raped her! You know, you make me hate him more and more with each passing day. lol Ugh...I can't stand him... T.T Anyway...Great story! :D
TwiLighTObs3sS3d chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
omg i love your story i almost cried

EDWARD IS A FUCKING ASSHOLE RAPIST DAWG OF A WHORE OF A SLUT OF A CUNT DOG OF A MOTHER FUCKER.

*BREATHS IN DEEPLY*

OK I KINDA OVERREACTED

GOOD STORY

I TOLD YOU THE TITLE WOULD FIT PERFECTLY

ILY SARAH