Reviews for Conversations
CersiFinallyGotWhatSheDeserved chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
A great story. Very well written.
Irritable Insanity chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Hm. It's easy to forget that men change over the years. The surly, grim, yet in at least some ways wise old man we meet in Return of the King may not have always been as inflexible as always. I think you do a good job writing a young Denethor: suspicious, intelligent, but not over-grating (unlike his portrayal in the ROTK movie; that is one of my gripes with that). There is in that a hint of the Denethor we see in the books, but he's not grown to his full unpleasantness yet. Here it just seems like he's a man who is cautious and cares for his people. Very nice.
the green lama chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
I liked this. It's nice to see Denethor presented as anything other than a surly old man, and his river crossing was a particularly good part of this. Your writing is wonderfully clear when compared to some of the stuff on this site.