|Reviews for The One For Me|
| Moonlight Cosmic Angel chapter 31 . 1/17
i loved the story
| brizileigh chapter 31 . 1/12
This story is oh my gosh AMAZING! It made me happy,sad, angry, and it was SO suspenseful! I even cried when Charlie died. You are sincerely a good writer!
| SkyBlueBri chapter 3 . 9/16/2013
Awww, look at Carisle trying to be all noble even if it does make him look stupid. Lol
| Bell 1 chapter 30 . 7/27/2013
Thank you for sharing your story with us. I enjoyed the journey. Edward cwas quite the little turd, wasn't he? LOL
As much as I enjoyed the story, there was one thing that bothered me. You had Carlisle adamant to wait until marriage for them tot be intimate, but I think you missed the point of why people, especially those born before 1950, chose to wait until marriage. What I mean is, when they did that back in the day, it wasn't "let's do everything short of sex". They wouldn't even dare touch areas that were covered by clothing. Therefore, having Carlisle be adamant that they wait until marriage and then they strip naked in the middle of a clearing in the forest, seemed very unlikely for someone wanting to honor that moral value.
However, that being said, I sort of understand why you did since you made it so that Carlisle threw his beliefs out the window as though he just couldn't help himself because he desired Bella more than his own faith. Which, in a sense, also seems unlikely to me, but I see where you were taking the story and what you were doing. I just didn't think it meshed well with that concept, or with Carlisle's deep beliefs. Therefore, I read the story as though Carlisle was born in, let's say 1980 instead of the mid-1600s because that seemed more realistic to me.
Other than that part of your story, I loved that Alice wasn't TOO much, Rosalie was actually kind to Bella, Emmett was fun (as usual), and Jasper was close to Bella. The killing off of Charlie was devastating, but Bella's dream after she died, having him be with Bella during her change, and the end when she burned Edward's final piece were very sweet touches. With the exception of the saving himself for marriage bit, I enjoyed this story and the twists and turns. Thank you for sharing.
| gopherbroke chapter 2 . 4/28/2013
I tried really hard to read this because I sooooo want a good Carlisle/Bella story to read. But the grammar, spelling, and punctuation became really distracting. Maybe have someone edit your chapters? Just a suggestion.
| NESSAANCALIME6913 chapter 31 . 1/7/2013
Loved the story!
| Sasha chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
finally a Carlisle and Bella story that's just right
| galyardt chapter 31 . 6/29/2012
i really enjoyed reading this
| heartbrokentears chapter 11 . 4/25/2012
I love your story but I'm a real grammar Nazi.
Two the word that has numerical value,
ex.) I have two pairs of shoes
To the preposition (show relation to where something is), ex.) I went to the mall
Too shows that something has occurred that another thing did
ex.) I love you, too. Me too.
| jacksperluvr chapter 31 . 2/13/2012
I loved it. It was a new and different way of doing a Carlisle and Bella story. You are an excellent writer
| carlynch05 chapter 11 . 2/9/2012
love it love it love it
| carlynch05 chapter 4 . 2/8/2012
love this story
| pegasus5406 chapter 30 . 12/3/2011
Awww fabulous story hon...I loved every bit of it...I'm glad Bella got her closer with Edward, I was also glad that Charlie was there when she was turned and helped her along the short way, and that she got even with Edward for killing her dad, and he was there even then...awesome story and chapter...thank you so much for sharing your story with us...bigg huggs peggy
| pegasus5406 chapter 18 . 12/2/2011
Damn it... He did kill Charlie...well nothing to stop her from changing now, Carlisle might as well make her one of them, if nothing else to protect her from Stupid Ass...lol...loving this story and can't wait to read more...thanks hon...huggs Peggy
| pegasus5406 chapter 15 . 12/2/2011
Wow great chapter hon...loving this story, Carlisle and Bella are so cute together, the love they share in you story is so pure...I absolutely love it...I hope Edward doesnt hurt any of the Cullen's or Charlie...I can't wait to read on...thanks hon...huggs peggy