Reviews for Heal Me
Runecutter chapter 3 . 3/22
Hmmm... more of an exercise in creating atmosphere (although a very gloomy and sad one), than a story proper in itself... but at least it gives us a Ginny that is much more of a person and has character of her own than all the JKR appearances combined.

The only thing REALLY bad was the "love scene". No problem if you do not want to write it out graphically... there's a time and place for that and it does not mean every story IS that time and place... but seriously... the ONE sentence you wanted to keep was "when he finally moved inside her"? That's awful. Totally bereft of any emotional meaning, cold. Clinical.
And I'm not sure I'm happy about "it" happening there and then... all symbolic meaning aside, the "this could be our only chance, one of us might not survive whatever is still coming in this awful war", a cold winter night in the sandy dunes of Britain's atlantic coast does not seem to be an ideal place for that activity, even if you ignore their friends and relatives being so close by and everything.
nayin1704 chapter 1 . 9/12/2016
sandry232 chapter 1 . 4/5/2016
This was an amazing short story! I had to read all in one go because it captured not only my attention but emotionally as well. Ginny is and always will be a very strong, independent and amazing women. It was amazing and eye opening to see this hurt and vulnerable side to her. You stayed true to then characters and it was amazingly written! I hope to read more of your work!
tanithlipsky chapter 3 . 12/31/2014
mrs.coltondixon chapter 3 . 11/20/2012
this was really sweet. i loved the part where you wrote the detention woth Hagrid being ruse! that was a twist!
Rachel Smith Cobleigh chapter 3 . 8/28/2011
Excellent! The characters felt familiar, even if the plot wouldn't quite fit into canon. Nice job with Ginny's character development especially.
LisiLouLah chapter 3 . 4/19/2011
This is a really sweet story, I love it.

Lisa x
Stephanie O chapter 3 . 1/10/2011
I think these are my favorite lines: "You aren't going back to Hogwarts," he said. "So there's no way anyone will be able to find this memory in your head." ...and...

"Ginny, no matter how this ends, or when I get to see you again...I love you. Don't ever forget that. And although I wish and hope that we have dozens of dozens of years together, I love you enough now for all of them, okay?"

You wrote a very romantic & beautiful love scene, and I think it left plenty to the imagination in a very nice way! I definitely didn't miss any explicit elements here; I have to agree with you - I don't think it would have flowed very well with this moment. (Other stories, certainly, but this one didn't need to be explicit.) Are you going to continue this story? If so, I'd love to read it! Thanks for writing, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of what you've written! :)
Stephanie O chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
I love Snape's password! :)
Lyric Medlie chapter 3 . 12/18/2009
this was so incredibly sweet! it gave my heart pangs, hearing Ginny talk, knowing that is what J.K. Rowling intended. so sweet, so sad...

Lyric Medlie chapter 2 . 12/18/2009
so amazing! makes my heart pang... i know i'm so lame! but i LOVE it

sarahbear22 chapter 3 . 11/17/2009
this was amazing story! Loved it
Spiked Jin chapter 3 . 7/29/2009
Great decision of avoiding smut just for the sake of smut. As in "In Case of Emergency" you have a good balance of story and smut. I was going to say this is a fun little story, but I'm not so sure that description matches the content. Either way, interesting revisit of 7th year.
HGRHfan35 chapter 3 . 7/28/2009
Hiya Mel,

I finally got around to read and review these chapters and I have to say that although there are many stories out there yours are always just a bit more special. Even when not NC-17! :D

Will there be mroe chapters to this story? I hope a few more.

You Minx ladies are all venturing out into the original work area now and that's great and I hope your dreams will come true one day although starting up your own company is not a small feat either.

Good Luck on everything.

Hugz, C
ProfessorChris chapter 3 . 7/26/2009
Another great chapter, I am glad that Harry was able to get through to Ginny and help her heal. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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