|Reviews for High Anxiety|
| Penname468 chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
I'm racking my brain trying to figure out what Edward did/was accused of that would result in him not being able to touch women. I'm assuming it was some sort of sexual assault charge because of Emily's reaction... but that seems like an odd punishment for that crime. I can't wait to read more!
| cravingtwilight chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
Steph, I have had the shittiest day ever. My computer crashed this AM, and I basically lost all of my pics and music from the last year. I’ve spent the last 14 hrs trying to recover it in some form or another, all while also getting other shit done for class. Needless to say it’s been a craptastic day….which is why when I finally dragged my sorry ass to bed I felt a bit of relief and got a smile when I saw High Anxiety was waiting for me. (reading on another family member’s computer, cause mine needs a funeral…after I beat the ever loving shit out of it). I just wanted you to know that you truly brightened my day and how much I appreciate it. Lots of Love, Gin and Kisses, Erika
You know the deal, my thoughts and reactions as I read:
I love that Edward calls Bella ‘my girl.’ Like, so much that it makes me have an inward smile every time I read it.
I feel bad that Edward can’t play baseball anymore. I’m assuming it to do w. the thing that’s coming in like 5 chapters. And I do love how B described the game etc, exactly how I would have too! :D
Either way, I longed to feel her soft little body pressed into my chest, her breathing rhythmic and matching mine.—god I love that line!
I want to smack Em upside the head…’manly wonder’ my ass. LOL
I would iron all the garments and hang them in my closet, color coordinating them into the proper section, while keeping the style of the piece in the designated area.—umm, aside from ironing everything, I do it too. Tell Edward it’s ok, I’m with him.
The cd/dvd/book thing though…that’s nuts, I won’t even go that far. Lol
Oh god, I love the morning routine. No matter how many times you write about it, it always makes me laugh.
However, each strand was carefully placed, so that its neighbor was not angled the same way.—neighbor...you personify your hair, Edward? Bahaha
She was complimenting me, and I felt stupid, so I made her feel stupid in return.—gah. Boys are dumb.
He spent forty five minutes glaring at her while she ignored him deliberately discussing her Homecoming attire in earshot of my seething brother.—high five, rose
I want a pickle pen! :D
She was so fucking cute, I wanted to scoop her up in my arms and kiss her and tickle her until she peed her pants.—umm, you had me until you made her pee her pants…lol, awkward moment, much?
Jasper is a twat. I’m usually all for him being an ass…but not when Edward’s got enough shit as it is. Makes me want to punch him in the balls. Then again…Edward’s way of dealing w. it is good too, lol.
Cunnilingus and Fellatio—OMG those are awesome pet names! Bahahahahaha
Wow, Dr. Kate’s office was huge! Great new info and plot progression babe!
“My father lost half the patients in his practice, my mom lost a five million dollar client and any future referrals, Emmett lost…well, Jasper and Emmett lost everything when we moved. It was my entire fault. And none of them are really all that happy here, so that’s my fault too.”—holy shit, I can’t wait to know what happened that would cause such a fallout. I mean, I’ve read the speculations etc, but I can’t wait to read your version of everything!
Aww! He bought her a matching hoodie! Too precious!
The lotion though, lol. Edward you’re such a cute little creeper, I just want to put you in my pocket!
| MsBliss chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
You are killing me! I can't take it anymore! Okay, I am being dramatic but each chapter makes me want to read more! Each chapter is better than the last! I have to know what Edward's deal is, inquiring minds wanna know! Edward shouldn't have bought me that hoodie... uh, I meant Bella *laughs*. He is too sweet! You are an amazing writer! Thanks for this awesome-possum story!
| hornywife chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
ok I have a question. Why can't he just tell her the "story" and they like mess around his house and no one will find out? And by no one I'm assuming the courts/therapist. I doubt he has people spying on him. Just wondering.
| lovelywendy chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
aw so cute ! :)
| SumFun chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
I can hardly stand not knowing why Edward can't touch her. The anticipation is killing me. So god! Thanks for sharing.
| letempspasse chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
fantastic chapter. every new installment adds just a bit more intrigue and i'm loving it.
and the last bit with the bella lotion was just classic fuckilikethewayyouthink!ward
| Ivygirl702 chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
Fucking. Loved. It.
| Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
I read '...Lover, Too' on Twilighted, didn't realize you had more stories here. I am copy/pasting this into a Word doc to send to myself to read at work, since at my new job they have every freaking website blocked. So it might be a couple of days before I'm caught up on it, but I'm really looking forward to it. If it's even half as good as Lover, well hot damn!
| SweetDulcinea chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
Spank lotion...oh Edward...
I loved this:
"She was so fucking cute, I wanted to scoop her up in my arms and kiss her and tickle her until she peed her pants."
LMFAO...he's letting his guard down with her more than he realizes.
While it's killer to wait for his secrets to be revealed, I love the slow progression you're using in this story. It allows for a lot of character development.
As for Jasper, I'm having a hard time getting a feel for him. Edward's distaste seems to be growing exponentially as J tries to get closer to Bella, but I'm having a hard time determining what's going on in Jasper's head. Is he unaware? Being malicious in a sly way? Apathetic to everything but himself? He didn't seem so terrible in the early chapters, but Edward paints him in a different light now. I'm interested in more of their history.
| Cullen819 chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
I am getting ansy! I wanna know what his deal is! Did some chick cry rape or something?
| ny88 chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
Really great chapter :D
| lynninlove1007 chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
Okay... so it's nice to know that she could be his girlfriend even though he isn't able to touch her. Now I just want to know WHY he can't.
I know I know... a few more chapters.
I do have to say though I have a feeling once Bella knows the reason for the non touching she will be fine with it. She already thinks he has issues with people touching him and she is still very obviously attracted to him.
Can't wait to read more.
| SnapCrackledThePop chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
First, people are actually taking the time to ask why there are not more anxiety attacks? Um, that would make for a shit boring story to have a anxiety attack every chapter! I think the story flow is going great!
I loved the line "It was a normal reaction to want to see him fall ass over elbows across the deck" LOL...like it's a normal reaction to turn a light on going into a room or something. Love how playful they are.
Edward, you shave your chest? No! At least leave the happy trail. That is vital!
Your Edward is seriously one of the sweetest Edward's ever. I just want to scoop him up and put him in my pocket to keep him safe. I hope things get better for him soon so he can touch "his girl".
| xXx-SE-xXx chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
loving the story! cant wait to see how it develops! update soon! xx