|Reviews for High Anxiety|
| dolphin62598 chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
Great chapter! I love your aloof Edward! I know he had issues just like Bella, but I like how he wasn't fawning all over Bella as soon as he saw her. His POV might be different since I don't know what's going through his head, but I like how Bella saw him! Can't wait to read more!
| sariedee chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
so, i totally went stealth at work and printed this first chapter so i could read it while i wasn't busy like the day you posted it...then i got busy lol. anyway, i finally got around to read it today and i was so excited i hand wrote stuff i wanted to put in my review when i got home! i am so excited you have a new story up! ibylt is one of my all time favorites! (and i was beyond stoked when i realized there were all these chapters up here that weren't on twilighted, so i had to put you on author alert here!) and now that i have read your profile...it is scary the things we have in common! anyway, back to the chapter lol i like that bella was older when charlie and renee divorced, and i like your charlie too
my favorite quote was bella "i had grown tired of sitting in the background in my ugly, understated apparel with my nose in a book"
as much as i appreciate how relatable bella is in twilight it just seems odd to me that she never wanted more. it just seems like a normal teenage thing to want to be more like others...
i feel for bella on prozac. i had some crazy stuff happen to me a few years ago (although not as crazy as my house burning down and losing my shoes! that sucks) and i developed anxiety issues. prozac does wonders, but people look at you like you are an axe murderer if you tell them you take prozac...it has a stigma.
there is a special place in my heart for broody darkwards with issues...can't wait for more!
| Avaleigh1 chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
You are a master wordsmith...Au de Derelict...is awesome!
| tweely chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
I love the reversal of conventional roles for Alice and Bella, fashion-wise. And B's prayer at the end rocked.
| laylieb chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
loving this story so far! You, my friend, are an awesome writer! And Tropic of Virgo does rock my sox!
| lovebuggkiss chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
this story is really good so far... i can't wait to see where u take it.
i see that it will be an edward/bella fic, but i'm all for some bella/jasper in the meantime were that to happen. ;)
| SweetDulcinea chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
Great plot and character development. I like that the interaction between everyone sets the stage for many possibilities. I'm really excited about this story!
| dariachenowith chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
Great start of what looks like a really awesome new story (now Erika made me read it, taunting me with quotes from chapter 2, which is a good thing!)
I love your characters and how you set them up, and the inspirational idea sounds great, too. And who doesn't love a dark, broody Edward?
| WanderForever chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
But I wants the smut now. You gives me the smut please? So it appears we have another good story to look forward to. Hope it si as good as I'll be your lover too. That story was amazing.
| nisilein chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
i love it when bella hangs out with ed and jazz in the tree house
lol alice, the chihuahua
what's with de nickname, xanax, what does it mean?
| SweetDulcinea chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
I'm pretty sure I already reviewed this when you posted it as a teaser on the other story, but I'll just tell you again that I'm really looking forward to it. I can remember in one of my soc classes in college talking about different sentences for privileged and underprivileged minors. You're created a good foundation here, and I'm looking forward to the rest!
| sljones73 chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
Great chapter! Loved that Bella is not some wimpy pathetic girl in this. The tree house scene was great and you can see how Bella and Edward have both been hurt...a bond forming? This story is unique and love how Alice is OCC in this one. Keep going...love it so far!
| mari alice chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
another good chapter waiting to see what happens in the next chapter. I like Jasper's nickname for Alice.
| sw1m4l1fe chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
Haha, "excessive masturbation"..."SO BEAT IT". No pun intended, I'm guessing?
I like the one stanza lyrics at the beginning of the chapters. It's a nice touch & gives insight to the chapter to come.
So many great things in this chapter. I'm excited to find out what happened to make Bella want to leave CA.
And, I can't wait to see how things work out with Edward & Bella.
Update soon please!
| jennchris821 chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
I am so loving this story, great job