Reviews for Incongruent
WeirdLittleStories chapter 1 . 11/7/2014
Nicely done!
not-exactly-the-truth chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
Alpecca Ankaa Black chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
This story is wonderful; I cannot fully express how great a job you did writing this.
lil'storm chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
That was awesomeness wrapped with pretty, big, sparkling bow on top. Really, I just love how you took the time to describe everyone that matters in Jim's life. Four thumbs up!
Ishtar205 chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Doni chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Really well done! Great little character studies.
hungryjunco chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
Aw, what a sweet fic. I like that you incorporated Kirk's wonderful relationships with the core of his crew into your K/S vignette. You did a wonderful job with this - keep up the good work.
Kiwee chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Beautifully executed-I love how with every exceptional person Jim meets, he has to make up a category for them because they're just. that. damned. special. That's the one thing I've adored about the Enterprise crew since forever, and it's not about to change any time soon-each one of them is so jarring and unique and brilliant on their own, but when you put them together, they become something breathtakingly gorgeous, so much so that they're singularly unique. Wow, what a run-on sentence.
DangerousVendetta chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
This fic should get an 'awesome' just for referencing Maslow's Hierarchy of Needs. Self actualization!
Dew the Do chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
Bjafi chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
Okay, so I really like your stories. Just sayin'.

This one was PERFECT in capturing Jim's feelings about his crew. You explored every facet of the crew dynamic, and did it well! And it was fucking adorable. Did I mention that? Yeah. Fucking adorable.
ginevra85 chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
this was wonderful! thank you so much! i was so sad til a second ago and it was just what i needed. keep up the good work! :D

chocolatelover1 chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
.. Loved it! lol

It's so cute, and I loved how you (or Jim _) defined everyone, like Chekov lol Evil mastermind...

Anyway, Awesome! :D
queen of magicians chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
what was the rating for?
Thedummie2 chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Wow. Beautiful short fic. You have every character's personality straight down, and Kirk's voice and development in such a short fic is done wonderfully.

Definitely one of my fav one shots in a long time.

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