Reviews for Cursed to Lose
cmkyrian chapter 2 . 4/27/2017
beautifully done
Guest chapter 2 . 10/12/2016
Really interesting story. It's something I wondered about as well. If Hinata wasn't as kind as she is, she could have easily used the curse seal on Neji, and I think Neji knew it in the back of his head in the Naruto canon.
SakuHina-X3 chapter 2 . 7/6/2016
Wow, i really hope you'll decide to take up this story again, it's really interesting:)
Let inspiration come to you;)
Good luck!
PleaseHelpMeI'mObsessed chapter 2 . 1/20/2015
This was really good please write more for this story!
Guest chapter 2 . 9/4/2014
Omg please write more! I love this fic and believe it or not it's one of my favorites!
Alma Hitsugaya chapter 2 . 12/1/2013
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AiLeiben chapter 2 . 5/4/2013
I liked it! Poor Neji and Hinata. But mainly Neji... Good job!
la bellatrix chapter 2 . 12/5/2012
-I like this story so 's an interesting concept and the characterization is good.i'm following this story,i can't wait to see what happens next
flipflop386 chapter 2 . 5/15/2012
still waiting for chapter 3! ;D
flipflop386 chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
Hi! me again! PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING. I meant to keep my promise on reviewing everyday, but the stupid system didn't let me do it more than once per chapter when logged in... but anyway KEEP WRITING
flipflop386 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
me again! still love this! keep writing! (One hint of advice: using "being words" (been, had been, having been, etc.) makes a story sound bland and in the past. Go reread a chapter or so in one of your favorite books. You'll probably notice that the story is all in the present, and doesn't really have many "being words". To really intrigue readers, write your stories in the present tense, so they feel like they are a part of it! :)also, before you submit your story, proof check it, search for "being words" and try to replace them with the present tense. (ex: she had been walking when she had noticed the boy... She was walking when she noticed the boy) I know that it's pretty difficult to change to the present when the story is written in 3rd person, which is why it's meant for 1st person stories, but the story will sound more exciting by eliminating ~85% of these "filler words") :) Just a bit of advice, I hope it didn't sound mean! Keep writing pleaseeeeeeeeeee! Otherwise, I'll just keep badgering you!
flipflop386 chapter 2 . 4/24/2012
PLEASE KEEP WRITING. I will literally review this story everyday until you write more.
tttttttttt chapter 2 . 4/18/2012
Stormie100 chapter 2 . 3/24/2012
Please update this story! It's awesome. I want to know how this will change Neji.
The Lamplight Detective chapter 2 . 6/5/2011
This is amazing!

Loving the neji angst and the little bits of gai/neji

Please write more! I'd love to see what happens after the chunin exams when neji is recovering.

Great story! :)
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