|Reviews for Rinnegan Raising|
| Ultimate-Zelda-fan chapter 12 . 4/14
Couldn't help but notice that Hinata didn't have a reaction to the team match-ups.
| Leaf Ranger chapter 12 . 4/14
Hmmmm. An interesting chapter overall, and the end part was interesting. I can see the wisdom in the training method, but I also think it might be a little too late to implement it. Such a method of switching up teams should be done as training in the Academy.
Oh well. *shrugs8 Overall, good chapter. Keep it up!
| Undeniably Uzumaki chapter 10 . 4/13
So just going to point this out, no idea if it applies to your story or not though. Chakra when used in the body naturally enhances s shinibi's strength many times over. A man with a heavily damaged arm and no chakra could not possibly have held Hinata captive. And I feel this ought to be mentioned, snow is one of the absolute worst weapons to use as a shinobi. It is too valuable to leave behind, it takes up both hands, it is very slow without years upon years of training to master the total form and draw, nock, aim, and fire. And I also feel you underestimate earth clones. While not as powerful as wood clones, they are otherwise the most resistant to being eliminated, and it takes lethal blows to kill water clones. Meaning it would take the same at minimum to kill the earth clones. It's an interesting plot, but you seem to ignore the many advantages of ninja for emotional situations. The hostage is just the worst one. Assuming Itachi didn't paralyze with genjutsu, break out the Mangekyo, or otherwise kill from range, he can still move faster than the mans arm can twitch, get behind him, and sever the spine while driving the kunai into his brain. The truth is you just wanted a way to say. Hey, there's real danger and hard choices, without having to design an opponent with any ability to actually force those. Also, I really hate how everyone applies the "killing is wrong" sentiment to their world. This is a society where there are tens of thousands of trained assassins. I'm somewhat doubtful there is anywhere near the same regard for human life, especially after years of mental conditioning at an academy that is specifically meant to make them killers.
| my 2 guys chapter 11 . 4/12
that was good keep the chapters coming
| SanDemonMax chapter 11 . 4/8
Get stuck writing more; that was brilliant. I was against a wall laughing.
| Gold Testament chapter 4 . 4/7
I guess it's like a different version of the bell test. Though I loved when the remnants of the clan saw something not even Fugaku or Mikoto ever saw in their entire lives. Itachi's absolute rage and fury.
| Gold Testament chapter 3 . 4/7
Basically Nagato's thinking of killing corrupt politicians, clan heads, and even kage and having them replaced with more people that would think of the needs of their people and peace right?
| Leaf Ranger chapter 11 . 4/7
Poor Naruto. Just wanted to see his girlfriend, and now there's a celebration for his humiliation.
Overall, good chapter. *nods* I liked it. . The part where Itachi talked to Hinata was good too.
| Smartboi chapter 1 . 4/7
There was no pornography 0/10
| Monster King chapter 10 . 1/31
Great story I just hope that you didn't abandoned it that would be a shame but that is what it looks like sadly.
| ladyres chapter 1 . 1/29
Uzamai used to be a clan some members were wiped out some are scattered across different countries in naturo universe nagato karin kushina mito are members of that clan
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/28/2016
Please update soon...This is an amazing story
| Annabell242 chapter 1 . 9/8/2015
Xander Jaws i was wondering if you could posably direct tme to this story you mentioned to Uchiha Lord 15 when you replyed to him in the begining of the story this"" Uchiha Lord 15: This idea came to me when I was reading a fic about Deidara and Sasori raising Naruto""
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2014
Very good first chapter, you made a good reason for Nagato raising Naruto. I really wish there were more fanfics like this, I hope you finish this story soon!
| ZyiareHellsing chapter 10 . 10/21/2014
Thanks for the great update! !