Reviews for The First Cut is Deepest
badkidoh chapter 1 . 3/29/2015
it was good but sad ending.
adfgds chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
Um, no offense, that was good, except that it seems a really...harlequin-ish way for Sev and Lily to, er, do it together. I mean with all the use of the word "wanton" and the...chocolate. It seems kind of OOC. And that they would be really good at sex at age...16? 17? Not trying to flame you, just tell you what I think could have been improved.
littledarkone chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
That was just... guh. Beautiful and heartbreaking all at once. Loved it! Keep up the good work :)
Quirke chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
Whoa, Snape is so sexy.

Well this was great! Really wonderfully written and a delight to read. The last line worked brilliantly, too. This was definitely the best Snape/Lily M story I've read.
Cjas chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
I really liked this story, because it shows a nice side of Snape.

In this story you could really tell how much Snape loved Lily.

Great story :)