|Reviews for Moments|
| Bethann robbins chapter 9 . 4/8
This was soo freaking beautiful I was blushing and having nosebleeds so it was beautiful. This fanfic was beautifully written and has some type of sexy feel to it
| vXxBlackRabbitxXv chapter 9 . 9/18/2014
In a way the ending was kind of unnerving but cute nonetheless
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/22/2014
I've always been confused about self mutilation and why it's done, even though my sister even went that way, praise god she's better now. This kinda clears up the subject a bit though it was hard to read cause of the dark subject, but I think this was something I needed to face even though I didn't want to. Thanks for writing it
| dezi chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
ummm its maka not maki and its soul not soka or whatever just so you know im not that great with japanise
| DeaththeKidbemine9 chapter 4 . 4/26/2013
people might read this and think im a freak, but... I enjoyed this. not in a haha sort of way, honest. but it made sense to do that and i now feel a little dumb for not thinking on that more after watching the series. i can honestly say that i really can't see soul cutting, it would probably be more on maka's end than soul's, but still. it puts things in prospective.
i would be lying if i said i had never cut, but i also would be lying if i said i still do. i don't because i recognize i am more of a coward than that. and if i tried to explain my feeling then people would get lost. my brain doesn't function like normal people's brains.
anyways, good stuff so far. i am enjoying this and it is deep. keep it up.
| redroxy chapter 11 . 2/6/2013
| Blacksword 1 chapter 11 . 1/27/2013
Never have I seen a story that can be warm as fire at times and at others be cold as ice this was one of the best stories I have read on this site. Your world can end in the blink of an eye one should leave a legend behind you have yours well done
| eightbitGuitarist chapter 10 . 5/13/2012
I'm not going to sugar-coat this review a single bit, so just a warning in advance.
This was, without a single doubt, the most fantastic FanFiction I've ever read. Your vocabulary is wide and varied, making it interesting to read. Your style if writing is a bit different, and I really like it. The parentheses almost make it seem like the story is being read to you, and the notes are like little side-comments the story-teller adds. I think it's fantastic that you wrote about the more dramatic and serious relationships between the characters, including their conflicts. It makes the whole thing very real and spices up the read, so that its not just some fluff like everything else. I will admit that I had my face practically glued to my computer screen through the entire duration of reading this, which I finished in one sitting, by the way. This really is just a well-written, well-developed story. Bravo!
| Purehftw chapter 6 . 8/24/2011
| penshaki chapter 2 . 7/11/2011
What an amazing style of writing this is :'D Never before seen one... Really liked it!
| Cat Laser chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Both pairings are just so cute w I just want you to know that this is the best fanfiction I have ever read. The best story I have ever read. The best compiled setting of words I have ever read... IN MAH LIFE. I love it soooo much. I reread it every chance I get. Thank you for being awesome 3 You deserve all the cookies in the world!
| LittleMissSophie chapter 9 . 4/2/2011
Oh my gosh I love you so much I am so favouriting this omgsh ahhh...
| LittleMissSophie chapter 7 . 4/2/2011
Ohhh that is the most ADORABLE thing since the world has ever seen and like, oh my gosh I love your writing. I even like the SoulxMaka moments of the other story, thats how good of a writer you are. :)
| LittleMissSophie chapter 5 . 4/1/2011
Hooooolllllllyyyyyy Ssshhhiiiiittttttt. This is INTENSE. like, ahhhhh I won't be able to sleep... Well that's what I get for being on FF at 1 AM in the morning xD I love the two stories that you have so far, vveeerrryyyy gooooddd
| LittleMissSophie chapter 3 . 4/1/2011
My God, I think MY heart was going a km a minute! Keep it up xD I'm def subbing ;)