Reviews for The Weakest Link
PurpleRain27 chapter 1 . 4/8
This really could be extended. Does Bella go to James?
snoopylover60 chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
Good story.. I would like to see more :D
romycullen chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
Oh please can we have a second chapter? I don't want her to be James' sub :(
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
loved this fict from start to finish
please expand your writing is brilliant
MatingInspires chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
It sucks that we don't get to see if he fights for her or if she ends up with James! :,(
FinnMac chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Would have loved to see Bella beg Edward to keep her. Oh well, terrific anyway.
twiclare chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
Very sexy, would love to read more, thanks.
Mommyto2 chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
kayy so i wanna know what happens next! haha
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
F*****ing HOT
beagil1976 chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
That was bittersweet, and a bit mean to leave it like that. The story is awesome don’t take me wrong your Edward is so passionate and feral, you write him like no other but it kills me that the story is left with a open ending. Would they break the rules and confess to each other, who would be the first to break? You are so talented that I wish you could clone yourself so one of your clones would be writing nonstop and creating this wonderful stories were our boy is wild and raw… my imagination is going wild with your Edwards. As always awesome story. Thank you for sharing your talent
LaSpia chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Really great chapter. Love your writing style and all your work. Thanks for sharing :)
irelandk chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
cullen sandra chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
That's the reason i could never be a sub, in my eyes all she has done was dance with somebody, nothing wrong with that. If mike had naughty thoughts about that, it's not bellas fault. What did edward expect, that she is going to sit down all afternoon and be bored? Just because he got jealous, that's his problem so why did he hit bella and with a fucking belt? I never understand that.
pnkats chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Omg so awesome. I wished this was a story!
scareDcat chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
I really enjoyed this! Is it going to be a multi chap? I hope so!
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