Reviews for Dust
Half Demon Alchemist chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
Aww that was cute.
Victoria chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
Hippie. good job i liked it! _
HoPeLeSsRoMaNtIc-29 chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
So cute! .

There was no fluff though. :(

You should add another chapter to it.

And yeah, killing Ed would have been totally horrible!

Overall, it was really cute. Random, but cute!
artFULLYoutuvit chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
i think the story would've been better if he killed himself, your writing is good, but that ending couldve been really powerful
ImPaLeD chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
Bajebus thank god you didn't kill him, that would be very un-ed-like. And it would make me very sad! Good story!
JokerAlchemist24 chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
I loved it.
ieatcrayonz chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
aww that was cute :D i've never read a fic with roy sining,so you can have a cookie for that :D
radcat38 chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
I liked it. Interesting human Roy and enjoyed the creative plot twist of him singing and serenading Ed in PUBLIC. Love protective brother Al...he is too perfect. Poor Ed...in love and still being hurt by those he loves. Roy needs to stop drinking and running an offensive live (if I hurt them first and drive them away then I will not be the one to feel or be hurt...etc...). Roy...meet AA. Maes alive and still cool. Glad Ed has grown up (well he does have Al as a brother) and knows how to be an adult. He has learned to understand others and to go after what he wants and how to forgive. Am happy. Fun early am read. cat