Reviews for The Newcomer
Priscilla The Ancient One chapter 4 . 1/28/2015
this is a very good story, i know it's been years but please continue it.
SnowX24XWhite chapter 4 . 3/3/2012
I really like this please keep it coming will u be updating soon can't wait for more x
Emzy2k11 chapter 4 . 1/2/2011
Nice story please update it soon :)
shalmarrose chapter 4 . 12/24/2010
Cant wait for the next one
mcs1195 chapter 4 . 5/17/2010
I just found this story, it is coming along very well. I hope you keep it going.
VeronicaMars1983 chapter 4 . 4/20/2010
really great story and I hope you continue with more chapters.
StarReader2009 chapter 4 . 4/17/2010
I love the chapter; especially the almost kiss scene.
StarReader2009 chapter 3 . 4/15/2010
Sorry if this review is last minute; good chapter and I like it. And as I said in my last review, I hope you continue on with this story with more chapters.
Sapphireuncovered0123 chapter 3 . 4/15/2010
love it update soon please i beg youu ! xx
shalmarrose chapter 3 . 4/14/2010
I love'd this chapter thanks for updating
StarReader2009 chapter 2 . 4/14/2010
The chapter's short but still I like it nonetheless. I anticipate for a next chapter and more in the future if there is.
Sapphireuncovered0123 chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
love this story and think it is amazing

please wirte more i want to see what happens god im sitting here thinking of what will happen write more ! ..xx
shalmarrose chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
omg cant wait for the new one