|Reviews for All is Dust|
| Jessica F chapter 1 . 1/1/2002
Okay, I thought your story was written quite well. You had good details and you seemed to really go within someone's mind . . . but that's where the conflict lies. You went into someone's mind, not Mulder's. If you hadn't named HIM Mulder and HER Scully, and I wasn't aware that this was an X-Files Fan Fiction story, I wouldn't have known whom you were talking about. Try giving them the distinct characteristics that the show continuously supplies to them. Like for one . . . Mulder isn't really cold to Scully. There is only been a couple of instances in which he has. Also, try to put in a couple of jokes that Mulder is famous for and stuff like that. I'll look out for the next part to this.
| Anja Ryhem chapter 1 . 1/1/2002
Well yeah I think it's a pretty good start...but it's not exactly NC-17 is it?
| juls chapter 1 . 12/31/2001
hey~ sounds good so far... but hows that NC17?