Reviews for The Next Step
messyhead chapter 3 . 2/13/2010
A chapter so nice I read it thrice. (Really, I did!) I could hear their voices and see their expressions - you caught them so well.

Thank you for another great one!
SnowWhiteandDopey chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
Great chapter 3! What a nice touch to have the waiter call Jaime his daughter just after they had discussed something like that happening. I also like how they talked about their faults, as they see them.
bionic4ever chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
Very sweet! I love how Louise fusses over the little things (like sugar in his coffee) while letting him make his own decisions about the bigger, more important things (like if he is truly ready for this relationship). I hope to see the next chapter soon!

And...I hope he wears the blue suit, too! :)
messyhead chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
I loved that - the dialogue was wonderful, and I loved the way you started the story right in the middle of Jaime and MJ's conversation.

Their friendship is so clearly portrayed - and doesn't everyone need an MJ to talk to them about the stuff they might not want to be thinking about?

Just one problem - this story is coming along TOO slowly!
bionic4ever chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Mary Jane certainly has covered all the bases! A wonderful appetizer - I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
weavingdreams chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Yay for Mary Jane. Go Jaime:)