|Reviews for Raiden's Fatherhood|
| Dr. MKDemigodZ chapter 10 . 7/10/2014
Well, great chapter as usual. Man, now Raonko has Ashrah's "light" powers...well, it just became more dangerous to take care of him now...
| Dr. MKDemigodZ chapter 9 . 7/17/2013
yay! I am in this chapter. Although, i was expecting me and menny man get electrficuted by raonko though...oh well, at least I did not get hurt.
| LittleMissBecauseI'mHappy chapter 8 . 6/6/2013
| Dr. MKDemigodZ chapter 8 . 6/3/2013
um... you mean raiden hugged his son right?
| Dr. MKDemigodZ chapter 7 . 5/14/2013
if you are still doing the babysitting chapters, do one with the special forces. I thought it would be funny seeing ranoke "playing" with their guns and equipments.
| Dr. MKDemigodZ chapter 5 . 5/9/2013
let the shaolin twins(quote by johnny cage himself) babysit Ranoke! I like to see what he would do at their shaolin temple.
| Bellaswangirl71 chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Can you please put up more chapters I want to know what happens next?
| tarkatan chapter 7 . 3/11/2011
ah man, my fan name is tarkatan. can you do a chapter of rayden playing mkd on ps2 with his wife while their son is watching, also i can be there and say fatality or others please do it for tarkatan
| Vampuric Spider chapter 7 . 12/12/2010
That was a funny chapter. I love all the chapters so much who knew a little child would cause trouble. Anyway I hope you continue.
| Halloweenchick chapter 7 . 8/17/2010
xDDD i laughed my but at this xDD *falls onto the floor, laughing* i liked how you put it awsome job
| The Night Lord chapter 7 . 8/11/2010
Nice chappie. A fight between Liu Kang and Scorpion over Kitana would be very interesting/funny. Also, I could just imagine Cyrax having his own show. Don't ask me how or why. A chapter suggestion could be Ashrah helping Kitana to throw a baby shower, but Scorpion isn't interested and Raonko gets up into all sorts of mischief. The only one I could come up with right now, but good chapter and I look forward to more
| twistedwriter101 chapter 7 . 8/9/2010
Oh geez... that was funny. :)
I feel bad for the cameraman who was working the camera that Scorpion speared lol. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Menny Man chapter 6 . 8/6/2010
Make bo rai cho baby sit him then he teaches him his throw up move which he uses on shujinko then ahsrah comes to pick him up
| The Night Lord chapter 6 . 7/20/2010
Okay, so I just found your stories yesterday and I have to say, they're quite amusing. I really like the Scorpion/Kitana relationship you've got going (my favourite MK couple) and watching them interact reminds me of Vegeta & Bulma from Dragonball Z lol. And Raiden and Ashrah do make an interesting couple, I must say. I love the antics lil Raonko has been up to and *gasp* wow, Kitana is pregnant to Scorpion. Me likely. Some chapters showing Raonko growing up is a good idea, with him as a young kid, preteen and teenager. I know I look forward to reading more from you. Keep it up :)
| twistedwriter101 chapter 6 . 7/17/2010
Wow, why did I never review this before? It's great!
If you want an idea... Raonko seems to be a bit of wildchild, what if he accidently went through a portal to like, Outworld and meant the bad guys? You could have your choice of OOCness for Kahn, Mileena, etc!
Can't wait for the next chappie! :D