Reviews for The Gumball Rally
edward bertisber chapter 10 . 11/13/2015
grouchie how are you ive got 11 months and were threw atomatomatomatom000000000000004
georgematrobynki chapter 9 . 11/13/2015
William roma and susan christen and all my friends love this chapter and learnt so much abought life after I had written my life away for there concerns of a briter future love aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.007
Cthulhu chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
You just did this so anyone who searched for fanfiction about any of these characters would find their way here. Nice effort, but just a little pitiful.
petrie chapter 8 . 7/13/2012
I love Freddie in this do more stories with Freddie Daffers and Scotty
CanzetYote chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Wow, that's quite the character list you've got. I noticed some Blinky Bill names on the list but where's Shifty Dingo? He's like the coolest Blinky Bill character and he's part of Blinky's gang in season 2. I absolutely ADORE Shifty Dingo.
KidsWBYungsta chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
This actually inspired to do my own Gumball Rally version.

I like how you included the Looney Tunes characters and how fast-paced the action is in the story.

Good work!
The Turbo Man chapter 10 . 8/15/2011
I am very happy that Mary Poppins and friends were able to solve the problem that began in Chugoku. Great job on handling it. I also really enjoyed Yucko getting his comeuppance at the hands of the good clowns and all the 'Final Fantasy' characters united in their annoyance at Yuffie.

The bit with Don Vito and Tony Clifton was great as well. I see you worked your favourite Don Vito nonsense sentence into it, which was very funny. I still don't condone what the guy did in real life, but I do agree that he's very funny. Putting up with a nephew like Bam is bound to drive a guy nuts (LOL). I'm glad to be so close to the end now. Keep up the good work for the final chapters. Take care.
The Turbo Man chapter 9 . 8/15/2011
Very funny chapter there, and I really enjoyed the Uruk-Hai footage joke about the lawyers. The ongoing romance between Sakura, Hinata and the Lee brothers is still enjoyable as well. I was a bit surprised but still amused that you worked in a joke about that statue from the fertility shrine. Very funny indeed. I also liked the end bit with Legolas, Gimli and the 'Kung Fu Panda' guys. Really enjoyable.
The Turbo Man chapter 8 . 6/24/2011
Wow, that whole train battle thing was epic. I'm glad you wrote that in, and I liked the surprise with the Fat Controller that you told me about a good while back. It was worth waiting for to find it out. I wasn't expecting the new development with Mary Poppins's team, though. That's one hell of a cliffhanger to leave it on before you go off on your break. But you did an excellent job with this chapter like I knew you would. I look forward to what comes next.
The Turbo Man chapter 7 . 6/24/2011
I finally got around to reviewing this chapter. It was very good. I really liked the Sailor Moon bit, with Sailor Moon herself being as big-headed as ever. The stuff with Mary Poppins was good as well, as was the whole end bit with Mystique, the Ginyu Force asnd the 'Hello Kitty' cast. This chapter was great. And now, onto the next one.
The Turbo Man chapter 6 . 6/11/2011
Great chapter there. I really enjoyed all the goings-on at Mount Fuji and the joke with the Klumps and Ugly Betty. I'd certainly hate to be on the receiving end of Cletus' unique method of a speed boost like that. The bit towards the end with Pretty Sammy and the vampire teams was great too, as was Otto Meyer getting his comeuppance. The Stupids were very funny in their usual way in the same scene. The bit with James Bond and Kim Possible's brief stop getting rudely interrupted was funny too. In short, I really enjoyed this chapter. I look forward to what will happen in Kansai. Good work indeed!
Hildebrant chapter 6 . 6/10/2011
Great stuff. Would have liked it if Dracula had actually done some really bad damage to Edward and Bella. If you include Vicious and Spike in the next chapter, try and have some dialogue between the two of them. I'm also hoping to see you have Griffith from Berserk in the next one as well. Great stuff as always, keep it up
The Turbo Man chapter 5 . 5/29/2011
Great to see the story updated and this chapter did not disappoint. I liked the battle between the Nerd and the Critic and Chester A. Bum being his usual self. The bit with Slappy and Barbie was very funny, as was the stuff with Twister and Beryl The Peril. The bit with the Coopers and the Robinsons was funny as well. That was very twisted of St. John (or should i say Surjita) to do. First rate job all around.
The Turbo Man chapter 4 . 5/16/2010
Great chapter once again. I loved the Sam and Max joke about picking up the object. The Jony Quest guys hanging out with the Dangers was funny too, and the Gumbys being as daft as ever. Keep up the good work.
Action Fighter chapter 3 . 4/18/2010
I have to say that this story looks to be very promising and unique from within my own sight Charles. The huge (and I mean HUGE!) cast of characters from all forms of media was quite surpising for me to see and that it was something that took me in from within complete shock, but I have a strong feeling that you'll do real well with it and that you'll give us quite an experience from within this story's progression. You can bet that I'll stick real close to this story and see on how it transpires from within the future. Good luck from within your time Charles.
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