Reviews for The Severance of Haruhi Suzumiya
ObeliskX chapter 10 . 2/27/2016
Such an amazing and well thought story, with characters showing unexcpected side, especially Asahina, Haruhi and Fujiwara. I sort of wish it had a sequel, but...
Jester0fDeath chapter 10 . 10/15/2014
Not much to say, but thanks for the wonderful story. I enjoyed it a lot.
10char chapter 10 . 7/22/2012
This is truly a fantastic story. One of the best one's for this fandom. Felt little (overstatement) to no dissatisfaction after it was all wrapped up.
RealRemainder chapter 10 . 5/9/2012
Well, that was a nice ride! All is well if it ends well!

Still, Kyon suffered a lot in this... Still a damn good Story! Good job!
RealRemainder chapter 3 . 5/7/2012
Poor kyon...

That's it, that's the review of this: Poor Kyon...
sinister banana chapter 10 . 4/14/2012
This story is quite possibly the best Haruhi Suzumiya story I have ever read. Thank you so much for creating this and capturing the character's personalities so perfectly. I loved this story every bit of the way! Great job. :)
I Before A Except After K chapter 10 . 4/2/2012
Wow, great story. I have absolutely no criticisms for this. The spelling and grammar was flawless, everyone (especially Kyon) was in character, and the style is just like that of the novels. This is the kind of story that deserves to be on any Haruhi fan's favorites list.
raveman2 chapter 9 . 3/30/2012
Thyrokio chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
This chapter was pretty intense, I wonder if it's possible to settle this without informing Haruhi of her powers? Or talking about time travel?

I guess I'll see that by reading the rest :).
ChaosRune chapter 3 . 12/3/2011
Well, at this point it must seem like I really love torturing Kyon. But hopefully this hasn't been too over the top for anyone to stomach.

Actually yeah, its way over the top, not only does Haruhi breaks up with him, but from what I saw in this chapter, even when they were in a relationship, it never went past a master/slave relationship that they decided to call romance, it seems Haruhi is still treating him the same, did nothing change when they were dating? was Kyon still bending over every whim of Haruhi? And then you decided to send Mikuru to the future? now thats just cruel
UVlite chapter 10 . 8/1/2011
Excelent. I liked your Asahina (big), she was a great vilan. The way Asakura interacted with Kyon was humourous. Haruhi's assention was extreamly well done.
SWORDJ chapter 10 . 6/2/2011
Fantastic and incredibly realistic story. You wrote out all of the characters really well. Well, simply put, this is certainly one of the better, if not best, TMoSH fanfics around. :D
Pinehas chapter 8 . 3/4/2011
Ah, classic Big Damn Heroes moment. Btw, you haven't happen to read/watched Fate Stay Night, have you (although the fact that you are a troper raises that likelihood to at least 61%). Also, I forgot to mention: I find your version of Kuyoh strangely moe. I wish that Fujiwara would make a Heel Face Turn or at least not terminated.
Pinehas chapter 7 . 3/4/2011
Oh god, oh god, ohgod ohgod ohgod, this fic is spiralling into a crazy fit of So Cool It's Awesome. TIF is one of the coolest stuff I read in this fic and Fujiwara, you said that he was wearing a coat, right? So, would that qualify for Badass Longcoat? I'm not sorry for only talking about Fujiwara. You have only yourself to blame for making him so badass (well you do have my apologies if I'm part of a Misaimed Fandom :/ )
Pinehas chapter 6 . 3/4/2011
Hmm, Kyon sucker punched him, eh? I would have liked it a bit better if he offered him a free shot, like in the face or something. The fact that he got caught off guard is a bit disappointment but that's coming from his fanboy so you can ignore that. :D I guess that he's Chaotic Neutral, huh? Also, like JonBob mentioned in MTS, only people with full names had powers and did you ever thought that maybe, just maybe, Fujiwara is actually the Team Normal who pretends to be a Time Traveller? Apparently not in your fic, but what about in canon? Also, what's the deal with Sasaki? The fact that she's revealed as a Reality Warper yet is only called by her first name is something of a Paranoia Fuel (btw, talking in Tropes is FUN!).
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