|Reviews for The Severance of Haruhi Suzumiya|
| JonBob0008 chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Fantastic! I never got to see the original version, so I can't compare this one to that, but I'm definitely impressed.
At first, I was worried that you were going to throw in an OC, but then you threw in the real premise and I was floored. I'm ready for more, that's for sure.
Keep up the good work.
| Broken Kilter Express chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
In a situation like this, the temptation for him to reveal the truth of his identity would have to be such that this alone could become a second story in itself.
Loved the last line. I felt the original was great, and it only got better in the rewrite.