|Reviews for Bohemia|
| LolaTheSa chapter 13 . 2/11
What made this story unenjoyable was amount of ass kissing you gave jacob, why not just delete all the others. The only reason edward in this story appeared is to tell bella. "Hi it's ok if you fuck everyone in my family", emment, just really and jasper. Should i even start. Once you introduced jacob, every male character became second characters and that just made this shit unenjoyable. Like i give to shit if the girl still "Love" their mates. You made their mates support characters. Just put jacob in the description cause once he is introduced, he gets most of the attention.
| Fann chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
Okay first of all I have been reading this since you posted and it never gets old haha. Great writing. Alot of other people don't put anything into theirs. Yours is great though... I just think it sucks you stopped... You should add to it :3
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/20/2012
you should make more storyies like this
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/3/2012
yes,make her do stuff with edward and bella
| R chapter 6 . 7/18/2012
you should bring Nessie into the sex at 13 or 14
That would be cool. And really help the fantasy of "anything goes, "
| Logic chapter 3 . 7/18/2012
Vampires are undead and have no blood running through their vains. Therfore they cannot get erections.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
fap fap fap fap fap FAP FAP FAP FAP FAP FAP I CAAAAAAMMMME
| Venetiangrl92 chapter 2 . 12/30/2011
please please please continue this story!
| A Eternity Of Nonchalance chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
| letitbe54 chapter 3 . 8/13/2011
This was definitely the best chp yet! C/ E are so hotttttt
| madnessdownunder2 chapter 13 . 8/7/2011
| madnessdownunder2 chapter 12 . 8/7/2011
I still don't know what a dutch rudder is! tried a few of these! My personal favourite is the roof of my hospital! Very very nice! You could stop it any time! They have forever, though it would be nice to meet the children! None of them are acgtually genetically related!
| madnessdownunder2 chapter 11 . 8/6/2011
It has to be jake, you said earlier a human male can make a vampress pregnant if they time it with the day of her period! i wonder what ness will think of this1 very nice!
| madnessdownunder2 chapter 10 . 8/6/2011
Now Ness has been with everyone but her parents! she really is a part of the family!
| madnessdownunder2 chapter 9 . 8/6/2011
Go Carlisle! Well, he's not actually her grandfather, there's no genetic link! It's pure emotional! But i think i'd really enjoy that one, and breaking ones hymen with z finger is a good way to go too1 very nice!