Reviews for Five Days of Compensation
MademoiselleMary chapter 5 . 12/17/2012
Heeey

I really liked this fic! Great idea!
Loved it!

Mafe Ly
WolfChild111 chapter 4 . 7/23/2011
I like this chapter, you understand Hikaru's personality quite well and I do love this evil Kaoru. Good job :)
Yumi-chan-likes-chainsaws chapter 5 . 5/1/2010
This story was awesome! Psycho Kaoru yayz! Many cookies for you!
atomish chapter 5 . 8/31/2009
Aw, that was the perfect ending I was just wondering, if Kyouya was lying about Kaoru talking about Haruhi in his sleep just to get him to go home. It's just a thought

I love this story entirely too much; it's totally provocative but still rated T! It's awesome and full of sentences that makes me THINK and have a good story line!

I hope you write more!

Cheers

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Livi-kunxXxChibi-chan chapter 5 . 8/31/2009
You're so awsome! I was totally excited to see that you finished. Not that i want it to be done. But it's awsome.

Acerbically; that's the awsomest word in the world. I love it.

So like, i'm so sad it's over, but it's awsome! Thankx! You're the best! Thanks for writing this story.

-Chibi-chan (Not Livi-kun)
Anonymous chapter 5 . 8/31/2009
Yeah! They're back together yeah! And you still write very nicely. c: AND I HOPE I HAVEN'T OFFENDED YOU OR ANYTHING, BB. And yes, I've read that chapter of the manga. :)
Deekie chapter 5 . 8/31/2009
wo! finally together again! :) although i DID enjoy the compensation ;)

xx
kygirl101 chapter 5 . 8/31/2009
Aw! This is officially one of my most favorite KyouKao stories! You NAILED their personalities and gave them just enough leeway to make everything work out exactly how it needed to! 3 It was PURE win, which means I officially LURVE you (and your stories! )

It's sad that this fic is over, but I look forward to more stories from you! *author alerts* And, again, many kudos! Many, many, many!
shadowqueen1 chapter 4 . 8/24/2009
Kaoru does go an a date with haruhi and kisses her in front of hikaru but not to piss him off he did it because he's caring
OhMyGoshsickles chapter 4 . 8/18/2009
Huh? How can there just be one day left! You can't have Kaoru end up with Kyouya because he couldn't make up with Hikaru! Not because I hate that paring or something like that, but just because it would seem awkward, unfinished. Something needs to resolve, and if that means that Kyouya is with Kaoru than so be it, but, can you do it?

I do believe that that's a challenge, my dear.
atomish chapter 4 . 8/18/2009
I'm sorry; I'm terrible at predictions! But I do hope that Hikaru and Kaoru do resolve their...'situation' somehow and perhaps Kyouya can join in...? Yay for threesomes? Yesh, yesh, proof of dirty mind right there.

And I've probably said it about a billion times already but dark Kaoru is hot And about your explanation, I totally agree because everyone says he's the more emotional, elss reckless one which would mean he thinks before he jumps? Personally, I think he's one to plan and I wouldn't be surprise if his plans are ultimately to get hismelf what he wants. The twins do it all the time anyway, so why not Kaoru himself?

Sorry for the idiotically long, useless ramble (above) but your chapter just got me thinking XD! Loved the chapter, by the way, amazing writing, as always!

Hope you update soon!

Cheers

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Anonymous chapter 4 . 8/18/2009
Oh, don't worry. xD I do love your Kaoru. A lot. (I prefer kind!Kaoru but I do love your Kaoru as well.) This chapter was good. :) And honestly, I never meant to offend you... I hope I didn't? ;;_;; (Oh, and about the manga... Kaoru did those things because he knew he and his brother should seperate. But he said he's too weak to leave Hikaru himself so he tried to manipulate Hikaru to leave him. :) And sure, he tried to get Haruhi. But mostly he wanted his brother to be more independent.)
Draycos chapter 4 . 8/18/2009
It makes a lot of sense that Kaoru is the manipulator out of the two. Considering he is the more mature one, he's the one who thinks. I always pictured Kaoru as the one who makes the plans while Hikaru was the one who puts them into action. I even make him like that in my own fanfic.

Anyways, loved the chapter and I'm kinda said they're only five chapters, but that would explain the name.

Update soon
atomish chapter 3 . 8/16/2009
Kaoru is so sadistic and so freakin' hot! I love this dark,e vil-minded Kaoru and the innocent (well maybe not so much) Hikaru who's so desperate.

And of course, your writing is phenomenal!

Cheers

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kygirl101 chapter 3 . 8/12/2009
Grah! Even if people think Kaoru's a bit OOC, I love it! It's totally awesomeness on a stick with a Kyouya plushine holding the other end! Many, many kudos and cookies!

I absoloutly cannot wait for an update! So...Grah! please keep writing!
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