|Reviews for TF:A Reprogramming|
| Guest chapter 13 . 2/9
This has been the most emotional fanfiction I've ever read which tackled the mental and physical struggles that victims who suffered through similar offenses as this little merch did have to live with. I love everything with this work, from the beginning and till now. I love the way you write, how you use different elements and how you make me see the actual story. You have a very pleasing way with words, and I personally found it to be incredibly satisfying to read this. You use different character that makes this even more interesting because it's not just one view that you get to see, you have so many perspectives and different thought that I as a reader get to follow. I'm incredibly new this this transformers "fandom" and as with everything I immediately start to read fan made literature or slash with the characters. I've read so many similar stories, and none of them wasn't even near this, this very emotional ride. How we get to see this optimistic, playful, loveable and adorable character get ripped apart (quite literary) and how everything I love about this said character is just so utterly destroyed that I had to walk away just to digest the mental images. And slowly, slowly this character is picked up, and his pieces are slowly and painfully being put together from every direction. And then there is Longarm Prime, or shockwave who's just promising to have a comeback. I for my dear life hope that this isn't dead, and will wait for your wonderful storytelling to occupy my thought yet again!
/ faithful reader 3
| Namekiansgottalovethem chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
Hello, I have been meaning to review for a long time now. Not just for this story but the rest of your works as well. I tend to be shy. You were telling the truth when you said Longarms part would be nasty. I thought , "It can't be half as bad as some of the crap I've read in my life." Oh, the wrongness of that statement. I can handle gory stuff but the way you describe the emotional trama just...I was quaking by the end. I plowed through anyway because I'm an optimist and I hoped as it progressed something...anything even remotely good would happen to sweet Bee. That last chapter set me at ease (just a bit mind you! I'm still apprehensive cuz by evidence left in your other stories you have a nack for kinking the gears then slamming it in reverse, full throttle) and I thank you. There is an indescribable element to the way you write love and binding relationships that always brings me back to your stories page. I'll brave all the dark parts for the slightest chance to read how you bandage the wounds, heal all the soul rending ailments you put the characters I've come to love through. Plus you get my mind working like mad. I have so many theorys and questions. Is Longarm really S5? And did he do what he did because he somehow feels all those years ago Bee betrayed him by letting them take him away from their batch? At camp, if my ideas correct, did the fact that Bee didn't recognise the bot who broke his seals drive longarm mad? How is Bumblebee ever going to hurttle over the glitches and painful memories to let Prowl all the way in his damaged spark? Will Sari ever get to hug her Bee again and could they solve all Bee's problems if tthe'd just let her touch him? Everybot he knew before his torture makes him uncomfortable. So are the twins, new mechs he doesn't know, going to befriend him and be a large factor in his healing process? I could ask many many more questions but they are numerous and you could easily give me the answers. You don't have to even update just tell me in the end Longarm is reduced to scrap metal, Prowl gets the bot that completes him, Bee finds peace, and that somebody gives Rodimus a few choice harmful smacks upside the helm for being a nosey classified file spreader. Don't have to work hard or update. Just tell me the bare minimum facts and let my imagination sweep me away to my own version of the ending. Thanks for giving your talents, intentionally or bot, for me to feast on. Oh and thanks a million for mentioning weeping cheats art. Those fine pieces of theirs do your stories good. I'll always enjoy your stories. Bye
| LolitaPrincessLove chapter 13 . 11/25/2013
I love this fic, I know its been a while since its last update, but I still wanna read more if its possible
| BizarreImage chapter 13 . 10/1/2013
ABLEUHFGH! So many feels . I am glad I found this fic. I am not very acquainted with his fandom, which is a big question why I am here in the first place lol and am ashamed to say that the only means I know transformers is because of Michael Bay's movies and had to take in my fill of information on the transformer's wiki xD . So you could say my search for these characters was out of pure interest.
Nonetheless, I thought this fic was very well written, varying between actions and thoughts successfully expressing the horrors Bee was put through to the Decepticon's twisted mind to Shockwave's cruelty. I thought that your spelling was good, though I have spotted recently that you have taken on a new format, putting a few one liners into a block, is that on purpose or a glitch from the system? Not criticizing just wondering because it sort of does play a nasty trick on me while reading, then again it might just be me and my personal tastes :)
I know my words don't mean anything, especially since I am not a big writer :P but I think its nice you get to realize how good your writing is and you should keep going no matter how long it takes you because all in all its your story and you should write at a pace you're comfortable with :) (Especially with the work of being an Animation stream student- my roommate is on it too so I know you've got it tough on RL xD)
Anyways, I've rambled and babbled long enough :S
Great work! :)
| dragonbookaddict chapter 13 . 8/3/2013
In light of what this story is about, I feel kind of bad about saying this, but... TFA: Reprograming is one of my favorite stories! I am a hurt/comfort fan and I am studying psychology for an associate's degree in human services. I really admire the amount of detail that you have captured in this story. I know I use this comparison alot with my favorite authors and stories, but your writing is alot like literary quicksand; it drags you in as soon as you read the first word and refuses to let you go, and the more you struggle against it (like needing to sleep, or eat, or any other basic need in life that requires leeaing the screen this story is on) the stronger it's hold on you is, until you just can't fight it anymore. You have true talent hidden in those fingertips of yours, and a mind blessed by the Muses themselves with astounding Creativity and Knowledge driving them. Will you be uploading the next chapter soon? It's just... it's been almost a year since this story was last updated, and us readers are eagerly awaiting the next chapter so that we can find out what else will happen to poor Bumblebee. But, you are truly a magnificent author and we are (well, I am, I don't really know what any of your other readers are thinking since I can't read minds through computers or do anything else that would let me know what they're thinking except for reading their reviews) willing to wait for the next chapter. Until then, may Creativity always flow through you and Writer's Block never plague you. Dragon bookaddict out (why won't they let me have spaces for this?)
| Fanofallthingsdarkandmagical chapter 13 . 7/4/2013
Hey, please write more. One thing I like about this story is its depth, you actually make the bar nd this verse seem more real, ok to be honest I don't know who to explain what what I mean but the story has a depth and honesty in revaluation to the bots that I really haven't seen in many other transformers fics so please write more
| ExclusiveTM chapter 13 . 6/3/2013
Hello! I do hope you update this again soon...I've just finished reading it after starting it the other day, and ohmygosh, I am so caught up in the story line... I LOVEEEE how the story is going to far! Poor bee! Curiosity question, maybe answer in your next Author Note (I read every one :] ) how many chapters do you estimate this will be? Although, part of me hopes It won't end...but all good things eventually must come to an end. ANYWAY! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR AN AMAZING STORY! KEEP DOING AN AMAZING JOB! xE xxo
| Riyappe Paws chapter 13 . 5/26/2013
That was... Wow. I can't wait to see more. This became one of my obsession fics from chapter two.
| dragonbookaddict chapter 13 . 5/9/2013
Sorry, my dog jumped on my laptop for attention and somehow managed to click 'post review'. Anyway, this meditation technique helps people stay sane and control their emotions better, my masks simply help me with controling my emotions and there is one for every emotion, whilst my memories take the form of books, showing my love of reading, and my Flame Mask is not simply criticing writing, but other things as well) *puts on Flame Mask* STOP FRAGING DOWNING ON YOURSELF ALL THE TIME! *slaps author Gibbs style* I KNOW THAT AUTHORS ARE SOME OF THE MOST SELF-CRITICING AND SELF-DOUBTING PEOPLE IN THE WORLD (I just so happen to be one, so this assessment is from experience), BUT YOUR WRITING IS TOO DANG GOOD FOR YOU TO BE INSULTING IT AND YOURSELF! YOU DO THAT, AND YOUR INSULTING ALL OF US WHO READ THIS AND ENJOY IT JERK! *Gibbs-slaps author one more time then takes of Flame Mask* Okay, I'm done now. But I must admit, part of my reason for liking this story might be because I am a fan of the Prowl and Bumblebee coupling. The way the act around each other is just too much like kids picking on each other because they like each other but don't want to let anybody know. May Creativity always shine upon you, writer's block never affect you, the plot bunnies be nice to you, and your stories ever-flowing, for you are too good an author for anyone toever wish tne opposite to happen to you. Take that last sentence for the ultiate praise I can give you that it is, for there are very few authors I find talented enough to wish that upon. In fact, it has been around a year since the last time I have done so, and if I am remembering correctly, you are only the second or third author I have ever given that praise to. Please continue writing. You have more than enough talent to go where you wish with your writing abilities.
| dragonbookaddict chapter 13 . 5/9/2013
You are QUITE the author, and one of the few actually deserving of that lofty title on this site. You capture the events within this work so perfectly that anyone with a good enough imagination (and has seen the show) reading this would be able to see everything in this novel-length work actually HAPPENING within the universe of the show. Not only that, but you've managed to convey all of the emotions with a mastery that few of even the true authors have ever been able to manage. From what I have read (including your author's notes about how some of these chapters aren't your best work) even your bad chapters are amazing. I must commend your extraordinary talent. I eagerly await the next chapter, and shall be bookmarking this work as soon as I post this review. But, I must now do something that no autor enjoys doing nor reading *holds up Flame Mask* (my masks work the same way as Blitzwing multiple personalities, and before anyone says anything, I am NOT insane, my masks are simply a part of a valid meditation technique that I use, and are actually a part of my mindscape, a place that this meditation technique builds within the mind in order to help with organization and keeping one's sanity if they are in contact with people wi
| 16DarkMidnight80 chapter 13 . 4/24/2013
Well, I can't wait for an update. I don't know how long it's going to be, and it sure seems like this story is dead, but I sure hope not. I really like it, so hopefully it will be. I know life comes first, but you have a lot of fans, me included, who want this to continue. Hope you can find the time, and have a great day!
| Charlotte chapter 12 . 3/10/2013
Hey, just like to point out that you spelt Dysthymia wrong. But other than that, this chapter was awesome :)
| Sammywolfstar chapter 13 . 12/4/2012
Ratchet is going to kill Rodimus. Hope he wrote his will.
| blackeden85 chapter 13 . 11/14/2012
I am definitely hoping you will be updating this story soon. I have read it completely within 12 hours and I gotta say, wow. Poor Bumblebee. I HOPE someone nails Shockwave hard in the slagging optic for what he has done and in I hope it will be Bumblebee or Prowl who does it. That slagger deserves a taste of his own medicine. Keep up the good work and update soon!
| sculby563 chapter 13 . 10/2/2012
love this so far. I hope you update soon, its really good.