Reviews for Death Ray
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
This was really short
Abrupt ending
wait, does meeting Moist make him want to live again or something?
I feel like you could make a great slightly longer fic out of this concept
If you ever get the inspiration to do so... well... :3
great concept
Sakura Katana chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Very good. I'd read it twice before and forgotten to review, but yeah. Really cool, sad, fitting idea.
sondre chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
I too do not understand what the final line connotes-does Billy simply stop counting the days he has left? Or does he add more?

That said, however, this was a fantastic prequel to DHSAB. I also wondered what the MRIs in his lab were for, and this is a very plausible explanation. Very well written. :)
SG1SamFan chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
Oh, god. This is a wonderful, unique take on Billy. Every time I watch, I wonder what the brain scans on the wall are for. Now I guess I have a possible answer. I love this! Thank you so much for posting. :-)

jamie55 chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
That day, he wiped the whiteboard clean and started again.


*shakes head*

So... he got cured?.. I don't get it, I'm sorry, it might be that it's late but I don't get it...

Okay, well that does explain the MRI's...
Kaydance chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
So that's why Billy had those darn brain-thingamajigs on his wall.

Loved this little prequel. It was a lil' sad and a lil' sweet, and quite well-written. )