|Reviews for Dress Code: A Short Story|
| Scarylady chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
*snerk* *giggle* *mad laughter* This is hilarious!
"nobody ever said about him "who was that kid again? With the legs?" they said "That's Chang Wufei. Don't mess with him. He's bad ass" Well said. XD
Um..."pink day?" O_O Well...if ANY 9 year old was put in charge of uniforms I'm sure there are worse things they could pick (Wufei should just consider himself lucky that she isn't a Disney Princess fan O_O')
| NekoLoki chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
A great little ficlet, the visceral feeling is well conveyed. Plus, your imagery and descriptions place us right there. The feelings and intraspection is good. The language you use is also good. I would only suggest shortening a couple of sentences here and there, but that is minor. In all a most enjoyable read. _
| reb chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
I really liked Wufei's dry humor! Thanks!