|Reviews for The last straw|
| Sonyadore chapter 10 . 8/4/2011
I don't think Inuyasha has strung so many words together in his life! Hehe It's great that they made up, and good description of the emotions too.
| Sonyadore chapter 9 . 8/4/2011
The sparing match was interesting ;)
I liked how Miroku handeled his conversation with Kagome and Kagome's resulting choice and reasoning behind it - Hehe she seems to bump into people a lot doesn't she? Hmmm was Inuyasha on his way to see her? Looking forward to what happens next
| Sonyadore chapter 8 . 8/4/2011
Kagome telling her father off was amusing - if I said something like that to my father...
Hmmm so Kagome's village liked her but her mother did not - why did her mother have a child if she dispised half-demons so? And Inuyasha's village dispised him while his mother loved him... kina an exact flip - their situations...
I wonder if Kagome's father will be angry with Inuyasha when he discovers he's the sorce of Kagome's distress, and how Inuyasha will ract to Kagome's true identity? Shocked?
| Sonyadore chapter 7 . 8/4/2011
I think Inuyasha's reaction was well written and so was Kagome's when Sango convinced her to come with her and watch Inuyasha on the night of the new moon... though I would have liked a little more detail in regard to what Kagome was thinking. (Ah I'm probably just being a detail nut...)
Looking forward to the rest of the reunion ;) and a possible meeting between Inuyasha and Kagome next chapter!
| Sonyadore chapter 6 . 8/4/2011
Hehe like the secret names!
Hmmm why is only Sango mentioned? Wouldn't the others be with her?
I look forward to finding out what happened to the others during Kagome's time away from them.
| Sonyadore chapter 5 . 8/4/2011
Ah! Nice plot twist there but I do wonder... about the use of her priestess powers in her demon form? And I wonder why Inuyasha didn't recognize her? Also about Kagome's control of her transformations... No other hanyou can do that save Naraku - and that's only because he's a collection of demon parts. Also with regard to Naraku - he didn't exist as anything more than a spider before Kikyou's death... and why would he have been after Kgome?
Looking forward to finding out!
And if it won't spoil the story please respond to this review.
| Sonyadore chapter 4 . 8/4/2011
Some nice advancements here for Kagome and the kinship bond is interesting. I am intrigued as to what else it entails...
Hmmm Doesn't the art of a priestess and demon slayer take years to learn not months or weeks?
Why has no one found Kagome yet?
I wonder what is going on with the group? Are they worring about Kagome being on her own? - Is Inuyasha getting it from all sides? Does Koga know yet? Has Kikyou talked with Inuyasha yet? What's going on with Shippo - is he missing now too?
| Sonyadore chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
Nice to see Kagome has some company and seems to be starting a new way of thinking! Also that she has advanced so much now she's been given some training and an actual chance to learn without it being in the middle of battle...
Though I do wonder where Inuyasha is in all this... and Shippo - why couldn't they have followed her scent? I would have expected them to catch up with her by now...
Also Inuyasha and Kikyou from the last chapter... I wonder why he wants to see her and if she'll help? Is Inuyasha looking for her to say good-bye? What's his thinking? Kagome did say she loved him, but also that she was done... And what has become of Shippo?
Looking forward to finding out next chapter!
| Kimmy ko chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
OMG! The west? Dose that mean america? Ohhh is she going to hollywood or new york? Or new jersy? I love the story so far! I feel bad for shippou though. Poor thing... Hes gonna loose his momma...
| chahiro in love 101 chapter 10 . 3/13/2011
| Sonyadore chapter 2 . 1/31/2011
Talking in demon-cat. Interesting.
Inuyasha; I think and hope he's going to say good-bye to Kikyou.
| Sonyadore chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
Um, neko means 'cat' right?
Why is she rescuing cats? And why is she looking for the shards alone? Why didn't any of her friends (save Inuyasha unknown to her) come with to provide protection?
I like the multi view point and that Inu's following her! Good dog! Is he lurking in the bushes or something? 2 days... he should've caught up easily to Kagome on the first. Is he debating how to approach?
I look forward to their encounter.
| fr0stedFLAKES chapter 10 . 1/30/2011
ur back! :D
finally! i was waiting to see what would happen to my favorite pair :)
this chapter was filled with d.r.a.m.a. and i loved it
thanks for finally updating, plz keep up the good work! XD
| jaybird200 chapter 10 . 1/28/2011
Yay! they're together again! Please update soon!
| Nuggets chapter 3 . 1/28/2011
by any chance have you ever read an inuyasha fanfic called life after the storm?