|Reviews for Head over Heels|
| Beautiful Jade chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
Wow this is a awesome story!
| Arcanegears chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Wow, this was really good. I've always liked peralshipping the best. The part at the end had me laughing, considering I'm at a friend's house and can't sleep either...
I supprot a third part btw...
| AirshipHead chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
All I can say is, Wow!. This is definitely one of the most descriptive and well thought out fics I have ever read. It was also funny with the conversation between Ash and Dawn while they were trying to sleep. Reminds me of sleeping round someone else's house :D.
I hope you write a sequel to this as I thoroughly enjoyed it. I wrote a little Pearlshipping fic but I dont think it's very good. Anyway, great fic man, see ya!
| MelliniumorderArceus chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
I LOVE YOU! MUAH! I LOVE THIS FAN FIC...!
| KungFuTruffle chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
It's pretty good. There is a lot of tense errors, but you already copped to that, so I won't get on your case about it.
I kind of liked how you went from a first person perspective fic to a dialogue fic halfway through.
And I would like to see another part. It can only get worse for Ash from here on, and which of us doesn't like seeing our favorite characters get tortured horribly?
| fhfhfhhhrh chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
That ending was very good. The whole conversation where Ash was trying to admit his feelings... Heh, it was very funny the way you wrote it. I'm not really a Pearlshipper, but I decided to click on a random fiction and came up with this one. Once again, I thought that very long conversation was enjoyable to read.
Keep it up.
| MissCheckMate123 chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
Aww, that was awesome! oh a baby! Ahh, the good old days, when my brother was easier...yh that's right, my bro was way easier to handle when he was a baby. Lol, hope the baby gives all of you the greatest love and wishes in the world!