Reviews for The Family is Complete
zaliarose chapter 18 . 6/26/2013
I don't know how I feel about Granger's trial. I mean, her responses about why she followed Dumbledore's orders made me think that her mind's memories has been messed with: "Professor Dumbledore said it was of great importance...that it would draw out the resistance." Shouldn't she have remembered more than these few sentences?
Mari Wollsch chapter 21 . 5/4/2013
amazing story, loved it xxxx
Mashkai30 chapter 21 . 4/2/2013
Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing!
Asmodeus-Dream chapter 21 . 2/25/2013
awwwwwwwwwwwwww
DingoAteMySpiderManCrazy chapter 15 . 2/5/2013
THAT WAS THE BEST BATTLE SCENE EVER IN THE HISTORY OF EVER
ob1292 chapter 21 . 1/30/2013
Would be cool if you made a sequel with the Volturi. Amazing story loved it.
candy4beth chapter 21 . 1/27/2013
this was beautiful i absolutely loved it
paw2001 chapter 21 . 1/25/2013
This is the best HP/TWL story i ever read. I've read it before a long time ago. I've been looking for it and finally found it again. Cant wait to see Whats next
andib chapter 21 . 1/10/2013
Great Story!
DarkDragonessFliesEveryWhere chapter 3 . 12/28/2012
I love this story so much its not even funny. This is a one of a kind story I love how all of the characters act. This may be my first time reading it but its a stand-alone story!
sunnitech chapter 15 . 12/4/2012
oh, my GOSH! EXTREME GOOSEBUMPs! the story is so extreme...
Charlii chapter 15 . 11/24/2012
This actually gave me the chills! It's amazing!
Lizzy chapter 9 . 11/16/2012
OK I like the plot and the story is good, but your constant spelling errors are driving me crazy. It's Voldemort NOT Voldermont, Selkie not Silkie or Silke, and you repeatedly misspelled crooked (these are only a few of the many spelling errors I see). If you're going to create a story based on a popular book at least look up the correct spellings for names. The same goes for your other misspellings. Use Google or Yahoo to look up proper spelling if you're not sure, or find a good beta.
BadassFanKickass chapter 9 . 11/5/2012
nice
Jessie Cullen-Potter chapter 21 . 10/22/2012
if this chapter was made into a short movie, cast me as myrtle? please! begging on my knees here!

i loved the story all together, it was awesome!
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