Reviews for Kidnapped
Guest chapter 4 . 2/15/2015
Guest chapter 4 . 12/22/2014
to continue! I ask, I want to know what is happening, the salvation of Optimus.
Finnish chapter 4 . 12/10/2014
to continue. will you? I want to know, for salvation optimus.
Firewarrior123X chapter 4 . 1/23/2014
Yay! Find Optimus!
Have-A-Go-Hero chapter 4 . 8/29/2012
awww, i luv this story :3 sad but awesome :P
DJ Bunny chapter 4 . 6/17/2012
This is a great story!

Update soon! ;)
Shadir chapter 4 . 5/22/2012
Magnus at the rescue!
Phoenix51 chapter 4 . 5/5/2012
Excellent chapter, please continue!
eltigre221 chapter 4 . 5/3/2012
ooh, poor Optimus, I hope things will begin to look up for him, and also that the b***ard of a mech who did this to him pays a hell of a lot, but other than that, I'm happy to see Yoketron in this along with Prowl, this is going to get better, I just know it. Well until the next chapter, have fun writing, and you're welcome, I'm glad I helped you find the plot bunny for this fic again :D
eltigre221 chapter 3 . 3/10/2012
please update, this fic is very cute, and very good, I'd like to see what'll happen next, but if not, then oh well, anyway, later :)
Eloeehez chapter 3 . 2/6/2011
:D Interesting fic. I'm glad you're writing it as I was hoping to find one like it. Hadn't thought of Magnus as such an older brother. New and interesting perspective. I hope you post more soon-ish.

Suggestion: some sort of page break (horizontal line, asterisks, ect.) between scene changes/POV changes. In my opinion, makes it easier to read/recognize transitions.
Robin Grimm-Goodfellow chapter 3 . 11/16/2010
*sniffle* sad. Poor...Opty
Smokes91 chapter 3 . 6/11/2010
Oh. Poor Optimus... Magnus just has to get to him in time... Update soon.
Lunabug chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
Poor, poor Optimus! D': Please save him Magnus!
BTW, which continuity is this? I could see it being G1 or TFA :3
CampionSayn chapter 3 . 4/30/2010

I'm loving this to little tiny pieces! It's both exciting and thought provoking! Keep up the good work!
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