Reviews for When They Thought Things Could'nt Get Any Better
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 12 . 5/15/2010
" You're right, forever and all eternity will I be with you."

That is so romantic from Derek and didn't Dean say that second part earlier on to Kaylie?

Clever way to add Truman but I'm glad they kick him out D

I like the ending a lot. Great story!
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 10 . 5/15/2010
Poor Dean.

Clever how you worked Max into this chapter.

Clever way to speed up time.
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 7 . 5/15/2010
Some good and bad moments in this chapter. I wish there wasn't sadness but it seems to go with the story.

Great story.
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 6 . 5/15/2010
I'm sad for Kaylie and the news about Edwin (

I'm happy that they both had a great Christmas.
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 5 . 5/15/2010
Nora and George use to date in high school...lol! Where's Edwin?

I like Derek's reaction to Casey's little admission D

I like Dean & Kaylie. I hope she tells someone she's sick.
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 3 . 5/15/2010
Loving all the romance in the air. Love their thoughts too D
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 2 . 5/15/2010
Awww! So cute!

Shawn is a jerk. Hooray for Derek being there D
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
Oh I like that!

Seems like Derek got Casey to forget about Shawn.

Sometimes you wrote 'Cassie' when you referred to Casey
Leaf26 chapter 12 . 12/20/2009
Wonderful updates and a Wonderful story, you did a really good job...Keep it up!
LeanneDaseyLover chapter 12 . 11/17/2009
I loved it. What was up with the beeping? Bet you told in the sequel didnt you? I'm gonna go read it now. TTYL!
Ghostwriter chapter 12 . 9/19/2009
Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.
ImOnlyYourKitten chapter 12 . 8/30/2009
wat no! i hope that was just a school bus backing up and not an alarm clock!

no no no no it can not be an alarm clock!

its a school bus backing up lolz

Melanie
dzdiva chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
This story had a lot of potential. Unfortunately, some of the plot seemed way rushed and there were about a million grammatical errors. It just got a little jumbled at times. The plot line itself was rather predictable as most LWD stories are so I can't fault you on that. I would definitely look into getting a beta or re-reading and doing a lot more editing on the story before posting it.

Generally though, it was okay. It has the potential to be a good story and you are a pretty good writer. I think you need practice and an editor and it would be great.

If I had to rate it I'd give it a 6.5-7.5 simply because of the errors. It takes a lot away from the story.
shipper4life chapter 11 . 8/12/2009
nice update. I really like the color scheme you chose for their wedding, it's really cute. I hope it doesn't rain for their wedding day. can't wait for the next chapter!
ImOnlyYourKitten chapter 8 . 8/6/2009
i cried again at the cemetry part :(

but good chapter again lolz
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