|Reviews for The Knight Who Couldn't Be King|
| WickedSong chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
This was amazing. You wrote each character in character. This is so good that amazing is the only word to describe this :)
| Yvi-sama chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
"He wont tell" lol
| CrimsonCobwebs chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
As someone said previously, I love the way you structure your sentences. They naturally flow into eachother and the wording is precise and graceful without being too flowery. I also loved your idea of having Vivi SAY those things to Zidane. I always thought it (as did many people, i think) as a letter, but of course no one actually knows! Nice touch, and great little fic overall!
| Leife chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
I absolutely love your style of writing. The sentence structure really flows. I enjoy your word choice as well. You make reading simple, yet beautiful without throwing in too many words that require a dictionary to understand.
Very beautiful story. I love it. :)