Reviews for Under My Skin
obsessedmom chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
great story... too bad its only a one shot... has lots of potential if you decide to take it further.

gossip-bangkok chapter 1 . 8/6/2009

amazing job!
Tiggrmommi chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
OME yes that was incredibly fuckhot!
SailorV911 chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
um, wow! That was hot! You never cease to amaze me with your talent! Please excuse me... lol.
Luvntwilight chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
That was very hot.
Mysterious Jae chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
Hot damn.

Write more!
IrishGirlTaken chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
I'm just checking out the competetion for the LtL contest. This was a great story. I especially liked the banter between E & B in the copy room. And a very hot lemon as well. (of course, I was hoping for sex against the door, but oh well) ;)

Nice work!

WhosThat chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
Holy SHIT you can write some major HOTNESS Woman. I just kinda FORGET sometimes and don't close the office door when reading. Haha. xoxo
pencildrawings chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
great story! this should definately be continued!
izzzyy chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
I hate one shots.

especially good one shots.

Because they're MY brand of heroin, and I never seem to get enough. I just want to consume more and more...

Wow I sound scary. Sorry! *laugh*
ciaobella27 chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
I loved it! I wish it wasn't a one-shot. That was hot.
JayyeCullen-VampiresxTwilight chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
That was a sickly sweet lemon .

Lauqh Out Loud .

But I loved ever word of it .
edwards-debussy chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
HOT! Love a 'cocky' Edward, and the intense attraction these two feel for each other made for an equally intense read. Great story!
kissyourself chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
hot. i love it. and i think the ending was great.
BitterlyPureSandcastle chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
Loved it. You should definitely continue.
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