Reviews for The Legend of Spyro: Daybreak
SpecterXCove chapter 2 . 7/31
This part seemd to last longer the first time I read this.
SpecterXCove chapter 48 . 7/9
Wow that was really something and I mean that in a good way.
SpecterXCove chapter 23 . 7/8
HaHA
SpecterXCove chapter 13 . 7/8
That was certanly... shoking.
SpecterXCove chapter 17 . 7/8
Still loven this.
SpecterXCove chapter 9 . 7/8
hahaha
SpecterXCove chapter 1 . 7/8
WHAT IS LOVE BABY DON'T HURRT ME
cmoreland chapter 48 . 5/16
Awesome story let me know wjen more chapters come out. And when is spyro and become a family
Tylor chapter 48 . 4/10
You never told us if cynder was sterile or not and never had them have kids of there own you should make a new one and make that a book for scholastic readers choice
kinkem chapter 1 . 11/18/2015
From what I've read so far you are a very good author keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 48 . 11/16/2015
This. Was. Fantastic.
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Nuff' said.
Guest chapter 37 . 11/16/2015
NNNNOooooooooooo!
Don't stop the story! It's Awesome!
Pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease don't hate your own story when so many others absolutely Love It!
The plot is fantastic and you have written so well.
I BEG YOU TO CONTINUE!
T.L.R chapter 23 . 11/16/2015
Hey, "The Lemon Reviewer" is back.
Again I say good job on the lemon, you paced it right, kept the romance, made it detailed, some mistakes I find in other lemons are lack of romance.(it may sound strange coming from a guy) but romance is incredibly important and you did a solid job maneuvering with it, some lemons just describe "the sex scene" and then leave it, that's what I officially call-"a romancekiller"
Although I find it odd that in most spyro stories with a SpyroxCynder and FlamexEmber story Flame and Ember usually go "all out" the soonest and fastest, and I have not come up with an explanation for it yet.
Good job, keep it going.
"The Lemon Reviewer"
Guest chapter 22 . 11/16/2015
Wow, again well done with building Flame and Embers relationship, that was clever and well thought out.
Imma" keep readn' now.
Guest chapter 21 . 11/16/2015
I dont know why you don't like this chapter man, it's a perfect way to kinda push the romance into a new area. You dont need criticism for this , I thought you organized that wonderfully,
I'm gonna keep reading so Keep it up!
I'm lovin' it!
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