Reviews for Unforeseen
MCJazminEvans chapter 36 . 2/2
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acompletenerd chapter 48 . 7/6/2015
I think this is the first fanfiction I have read where the main character actually screamed/ran from the autobots. Most just instantly accept them. I think your version is more realistic. Thank you for writing and sharing it.
99luftballonsx.o.x chapter 22 . 11/9/2014
Aww...poor Mel...
99luftballonsx.o.x chapter 13 . 11/9/2014
hehe...
99luftballonsx.o.x chapter 3 . 11/8/2014
Omg I am LOVING this story! Great job!
child of Jon snow chapter 21 . 9/26/2014
Oh crap not good
child of Jon snow chapter 19 . 9/26/2014
That snip it had me dieing on the floor
child of Jon snow chapter 15 . 9/26/2014
Uh-oh's for shore RUN NOW
child of Jon snow chapter 4 . 9/26/2014
I would of era tided the same
That was evil X3 chapter 32 . 8/11/2014
Merly that was just plain evil what u did back there XD XD XD
Guest chapter 34 . 7/30/2014
Yeah I'm married to a geezer

XD XD XD Oh lol i couldn't stop laughing that was so funny
Woooooow chapter 38 . 7/30/2014
Poor merly getting scared to death REAL SMOOTH MOVE RATCHET!
XD chapter 37 . 7/30/2014
Hahaha lol poor Mel

"You peed one me!"
XD XD XD XD
XD chapter 35 . 7/29/2014
OMG lol i couldn't stop laughing at that last part were Mel let out that secret about when she was five XD XD XD
00 chapter 6 . 7/29/2014
Lol i kinda felt bad for whoever got hit with the firework and I was really surprised that Mel almost went after "lil Ironhide"
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