Reviews for To Make It All Okay
scrtshdfgry chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
i like it so far. i look forward to the next chapter :)
LilPinkKitsune chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
Wow! you are REALY good you have to update it soon! I love it so far! Keep going!
write321forever chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
Good job! I can't wait for more!
Jezza chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
Great job so far, keep it up!
lulucats144 chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
interesting
charmedgrl4ever chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
konban wa

The story definitely has potential. There are a few instances I would have thought to change, but for the most part I really like it so far. Sorry, I know this review isn't all that helpful. I'm absolutely exhausted right now, which is why I don't have any specific examples of what I either liked or didn't. :P Forgive me. I just wanted to review before I forgot altogether.

Awaiting the next chapter,

-Shan-
rtag chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
Need more!
IceAngel89 chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
amazing, chapter. I hope you update soon!
LizStorm chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
I love this so far... You should write and post very soon. I can't wait for more
Kirsti-Lee chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
Interesting start. I like the flow of the words, and the nice way the sentences are constructed. A little short, but still a really nice bit of writing. The characters are pretty close to canon, but I imagine Hermione and Ron would be more concerned than what you have shown. Hope to see another chapter soon!
Kamey Rynn chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
A good start. I am looking forward to seeing how you develope this.
IceAngel89 chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
interesting so far.. hope you update soon.
mumimeanjudy chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
An interesting start - hope you continue.
write321forever chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
Good job writing this piece! I can't wait for more!
Petuniac3 chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
I always get excited when there is a new (well written) Harry/Snape story-I am intrigued
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