Reviews for Learning to Trust
CarvieCamfia chapter 29 . 10/31/2013
Sequel plz
AshaTwiHard72 chapter 29 . 8/18/2013
Damn. I swear that baby was neglected...smh
immortalwizardpirateelf-fan chapter 29 . 6/11/2013
First off...

Bella should have gone to the police and reported Aro with Jacob after he saved her not just going to Carlisle.

There was a lot left out of the narrative which did not allow the story to flow very well.
immortalwizardpirateelf-fan chapter 14 . 6/11/2013
You have the whole rape kit thing wrong. They would not have run the rape kit being as it happened more than a week prior. There would have been no evidence other than any bruising or tearing. Any lawyer James hire would claim it was due to rough sex. It's going to be nothing more than a he said she said and no DA would prosecute or arrest James on that unless he has good evidence.
twivampsalvatore chapter 29 . 9/9/2012
NannaRahRah chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
love it
Carrie Garcia chapter 13 . 2/2/2010
ok this was really short. I am glad she told Edward but pissed that she tried to blame it on Edward cause he wanted her to tell everyone what happened. That was not cool.
Carrie Garcia chapter 11 . 2/2/2010
OK I still like the story but this really is not rated M. Anyway. I wish you could make the chapters a little longer.
Carrie Garcia chapter 3 . 2/2/2010
I like this story so far. I dont really see any Rated M yet so far. But I like it. The chapters are really short though.
xXLife.Without.A.MeaningXx chapter 9 . 11/14/2009
Its a good story idea, but i have to say this, it has such bad grammer, and it went too fast. Maybe look into getting a beta? It would make this story a whole lot better. I'm not the best author, but even i have better grammer and punctuation than this story, it was kinda hard to read. Sorry (
Moonchild707 chapter 29 . 10/10/2009
Interesting story... I liked it, even if it moved a bit fast for me... but just a question... what happened to James? (I hope he died or something equally as horrid...)
Moonchild707 chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
Hey... you sent me a PM asking whether or not I liked the story, and whether or not I've finished it, but when I tried to reply, it wouldn't let me since you have the messaging disabled... so I came here instead.

I am enjoying the story so far... although school has prevented me from finishing it. I'm glad you like my own fanfics, and I'll usually read some from my reviewers...

I think what I'm going to do is reread this one and send you another review at the end with a better opinion, just because my mind is very boggled today... although I do like it so far... (I believe I had to stop at chapter 13)...

So... I'll review at the end. XD
Moonchild707 chapter 3 . 9/25/2009
Oh my Carlisle...

you reviewed my story and asked me to read yours, so yay! I'm here, and reading.

I hope James gets a good slap upside his stupid head before Emmett runs him over with his giant Jeep...

Hey, a girl can hope, right?

ALSO! I love this song... RJA's pretty cool.

twifanforever460 chapter 29 . 8/23/2009
I love it. It's one of the best books I've read on here.
Courtney-Babe chapter 29 . 8/21/2009
Thats was AMAZINGG!

it was really sad and very creepy at times.

but i still think its great

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