Reviews for His Personal Possession
S.W.A.P chapter 24 . 10/25/2015
It was good but seriously why did bjs have to be in it I mean seriously can I find a fanfiction without that nastiness? But I liked it
My NIGGA chapter 19 . 10/25/2015
Wtf 0 ! ONE WORD AND ONE WORD ONLY... INTENSE
Kayleigh J chapter 1 . 8/30/2015
I love it already!
Guest chapter 12 . 4/30/2015
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Commentra-DannySxx chapter 24 . 1/1/2015
Excuse me love is this finished? I'd really love to read it but I don't want to get into it if it isn't going to get finished. It would kill me hehe
HopelessRomantic chapter 6 . 12/29/2014
Ungrateful bich. I would certainly not mind having man completely obsessed about me. He can come kidnap me. It would be like a fairtytale! A girl can only dream... oh and the way he talks is just ughhhh why can't men speak like that in real life?! I just love beautiful words and he is just so poetic... *sighs dreamily*
posum chapter 23 . 12/28/2014
For chap 24...OMG pantygate was priceless..I adore this story..one of my favorites I read over and over. Please don't abandon it!
KimiD chapter 5 . 12/12/2014
So a little more is revealed... I think maybe her body is ahead of her mind or heart... it would be hard Not to be dazzled by Edward...
KimiD chapter 4 . 12/12/2014
Seems he has been watching for some time from the sounds of it. I am trying to understand if he is mental in some way, obsessive, yes, at least about her. Will no one miss her at her job? Apparently she does not have any close friends to miss her. It would almost seem like she did not exist. He is a mystery...
KimiD chapter 3 . 12/12/2014
james is a stupid, insipid idiot
I think maybe Edward is a bit delusional if he thinks Bella looks at him as a 'saviour'...
KimiD chapter 2 . 12/12/2014
Whoa talk about giving the girl whiplash a little Pit & the Pentulam swing there You sure have piqued my curiousity on this one I'm with Bella... I think he is definitely not used to Anyone thwarting his commands, wondering how this is gonna work when she doesn't comply to his liking she's just supposed to fall in line with his "wishes" I think we may have a butting of the heads before it's said and done...
KimiD chapter 1 . 12/12/2014
Well Miss Carrie what darkness lurks in that deep mind of yours... LOL
Wow quite a first chapter. This aught to be quite an interesting ride. I hope that by the time I do get close to the end of the chapters you Have completed you will not leave me hanging and maybe even finish this... One can only hope. So far, I like the way you write! Did you have a beta or do it yourself? Just curious!
LolaTheSa chapter 8 . 9/30/2014
Funny they talk about loyalty yet... Wait i just find that whole conversation stupid. I knew a dom edward was never happening. Bye
Hannah chapter 16 . 8/31/2014
I am so addicted to this story! *breathes heavily*
Col. Rage-Shadow Dragon Leader chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
Poor Bella! Yet I like the story so far!
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