Reviews for Strawberry Delight
samy.n chapter 1 . 6/22
mmmmh
quisha1991 chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
"WOW", is all I can say
lannaislusciousredd chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
holy hell. soo hot!

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Skia9 chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
I loved it!
BixieR chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
Great oneshot!
Drowning-Sexy chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
That was great! I really liked it and hope you write more! I need a writing partner as well!
Jazz1eCullen chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
This was gud and so kinky i really cant see Edward doing that but u kinda painted a pretty good picture haha good job :D
SexyCullenLove chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
One order of Edward with a chocolate strawberry on top please. (: Most delicious thing ever!

You have honestly made strawberries and whip cream the hottest thing ever, I would not mind licking whip cream off of this Edward!

There should be more fan-fiction stories, with Edward's like this one, he is beyond sexy and I like how you made Bella more confident and feisty.

This is absolutely amazing for your first lemon and you should be definitely writing many more lemons.

You should really continue this story and write about Edward having his way with Bella, I'm sure your other fans would love it too ;)
submesexi chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
i loved it wanna coloab some time
xXxlizardxXx chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
That was great! Well done! You did a great jon for your first story!

Liz

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RobstenLover chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
That was fuckin' sexy ;) Amazing job!
cool-gal95 chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
tht was so amazing...i loved how Bella & Edward teased each other. Absolutely FUCKHOT! especially naked Edward on the back aptio. Wish i had been dere 2 peep *wink* ;D
amwine chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
Wow great job...I can't believe this is your first story and lemon too. I love it! Thanks!
ginab chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
That was awesome! Very very good! HOT! Very well written and perfectly smutty!
Lori94 chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
WOW! I SO need more stories like that one!
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