Reviews for The Mystery of the Spear Pillar
JSB199 chapter 5 . 3/27/2010
no its not possible unless dawn becomes hi girlfriend in diamond and pearl.
Froggiecool chapter 5 . 1/3/2010
Ash? Grow up? Is that even possible?
Bill chapter 4 . 12/24/2009
I like the fact that Ash is the same character that I was when I played Mystery Dungeon. I wanna see how they will live lives as pokemon (even though they might revert to human form at some point in the story).
KARIN848 chapter 4 . 12/5/2009
Cool! So i'm just gonna take a wild guess and say that this is based off of Pokemon Mystery Dungeon? Cool story!
Froggiecool chapter 4 . 12/5/2009
Well, I must admit I wasn't expecting them to end up with a wannabe rescue team member.
This accound is over chapter 4 . 12/5/2009
chapters are a little short, but its a good story!, keep it up!

CrystalPrincess.xo chapter 3 . 9/14/2009
Great chapter, I liked it a lot. I thought Ash's reaction was perfect. I can't wait to read more. Great job and keep it up!
Froggiecool chapter 3 . 9/13/2009
Short can be good. I think Ash's reactions are perfect!
Froggiecool chapter 2 . 8/18/2009
Brock by any chance? Seems like a good story.
Anonymous chapter 2 . 8/12/2009
Please, Please carry on with this story, I am loving it so far, I can't wait to see what happens to Ash, Dawn and Co. I can't wait to see what is in the portal.
CrystalPrincess.xo chapter 2 . 8/3/2009
Awesome chapter, I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!
CrystalPrincess.xo chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
This sounds like a really interesting idea and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work
Redd2cool4u chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
Okay this was bugging me. But it's Mt. not Mount. Sorry!

Its a great start for the story, but I don't think a Flygon would be up in the cold Mt. Coronet when it is used to the hot deserts of Hoenn.