|Reviews for Dumbles gets caught|
| Sherwood374 chapter 1 . 3/14
What story? I want to read it.
| GatorLHA2 chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
| regfurby chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
You forgot his 'Get-out-of-Jail-Free' phoenix... I do agree that the manipulative old bastard needs to be taken down a peg or twenty, though.
| dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
Works. It is nice to see him lose for once.
| ray74656 chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
I like this one-shot. A bad day is what the old goat needs. Just not this bad.
| d1x1lady chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
| Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
BOOYAH! I'm not sure I agree with killing him, but I would say Albus definitely deserves to be slapped down in some VERY public manner! *EVIL GRIN*
| Wulffe chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
Great story line .. hmmm Stone family .. I like them already ..
| Jonn Wolfe chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
| Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
I never liked Manipulative Dumbledore. Even before he admitted in the end of OOTP that he knew about the abuse and allowed it to happen. Glad to see him punished.
| EroSlackerMicha chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
liked it. I never liked Dumbledore. or Ron. anytime they get the proper treatment I am happy.
perhaps a sequel to show a world with out AD and how Harry & Luna grow up with proper care
| Lw117149 chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
I love this i could see where this could happen in the love good family lol
| Runecutter chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
Oh being completely AU is not a problem, it's FUN!
What i DO have aproblem with is that for the gravity of their decision the whole "Stone family" stays veeery fishy and fuzzy you cannot really relate to them and decipher why they should be so fight savvy and able or allowed to make such a decision/judgment.
While it is amusing to see Dumbledore absolutely helpless in the face of something very like the various "tests" or adventures Harry would suffer through at his school in the canon story, the whole sitting trial about the old geezer subject is rather empty when presented in such a well quirked way.
If they're related to Luna, why not show it? Why not show the whole dilemma in the making instead of just having the "judge" telling us of what has happened? Why not bring them in in some kind of fighting scene with dark wizards in whatever country they lived in before coming to help Xeno out and so introduce that they are awesome fighters... If you really want to tumble into it with a clueless Dumbledore and unknowing readers provide some flashbacks, but i'm pretty sure that as long as you neglect the "show, don't tell" principle of penmanship and evade the need to provide a background for your OCs the story will not really lift off to become the fireworks it COULD be...
| LWJ2 chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
This is about the best of the "Bumbles gets caught" stories I've read so far.
It would be nice if you'd consider a follow-on story; thanks for writing and sharing this one.
FWIW, Luan Mao recommended your stories. As he writes a heck of a story, I decided to drop in.
| mythic77 chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
Weird. So what, so is Luna. I love Luna!