Reviews for Shards of Time: The Master of Death
MarilynT chapter 11 . 11/5
Well - this is a very good story. I am just sorry that it has not been updated in a while. Is there any chance you may complete this?
Mari Wollsch chapter 11 . 10/26
great story, to bad you stoped writing xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Lucy chapter 11 . 10/22
Love this story! I doubt it will be finished, but I so wish it was. The characterisation is brilliant and the idea is great! Don't stop writing!
Gruvia and NaLu 4 life chapter 11 . 9/1
Whaaaat! Where the hell is the rest of this story! It's so amazing, I want to read morrrree!
Dreams Of Athena chapter 11 . 7/17
First if all, abso-bloody-lutely amazing story! I LOVE the plot so far and Lord Peverell-Black. Secondly ignore the blasted comments. They're incredibly rude and dont give you the recognition ect you deserve. I really do love this and hope you continue on sometime. x
Guest chapter 11 . 7/15
That's rather nosy of David...
Guest chapter 5 . 7/8
I'm sorry to see this seems to be abandoned. What there is of it is well written and interesting. I hope the author comes back to it someday.
cliches galore chapter 7 . 6/9
Wow, you have really outdone yourself this time, haven't you?
One stupidly convenient event after another, like the hat suddenly becoming an expert on all things magical, and people not being able to see his memories? That is such bullshit that I find myself actually wanting to read on and see how bad this can get! How would someone like Slughorn be able to remove multiple copies of the same memory if your poorly thought out "interpretation" (which is just an excuse to say "I am an idiot and too lazy to think of a proper explanation") is correct?
cliches galore chapter 6 . 6/9
Wow, this chapter really IS full of cliches!
Harry is suddenly a master of arguing and EVERY SINGLE CONVERSATION goes EXACTLY HIS WAY? Check!
Ooh, a dash of the ever-obligatory, overused, amateurish scapegoat called "Dumbledore bashing" for authors who don't know how to develop characters? Check!
cliches galore chapter 4 . 6/9
Because mines are TOTALLY built from down up, and not the other way around at all.
Guest chapter 11 . 6/2
Great writing compared to most other fictions on here
ThunderSphinx chapter 11 . 4/17
Harry needs to join the Quidditch team!
ThunderSphinx chapter 10 . 4/17
Harry's an idiot for giving away all those Goblin-made artifacts. His ancestors will be rolling in their graves.
awefanfic chapter 11 . 4/2
please update soon!
LordOfTheGrey chapter 4 . 2/23
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