|Reviews for Ashes in the Wind|
| musme chapter 21 . 7/18/2012
I like it
| random yet lovable chapter 21 . 7/1/2012
i liked it it was nice
| watch who you piss off chapter 21 . 6/30/2012
hah, hah, hah. C.J.'s really smart huh?
| Robyntalks chapter 21 . 6/25/2012
nice story. well done.
| SoulMore chapter 21 . 5/18/2012
| Pyrane chapter 21 . 5/12/2012
You just HAD to kill Severus, isn't it !
*grin* Thank you for this story :) I first start reading it in French, but the translation was awful -_-" Luckily, only few words gave me real understanding issues, and my on-line translator is pretty helpful ;D
It was a pleasure !
| deniche chapter 21 . 3/4/2012
Greats story! Congat
| reiths13 chapter 21 . 2/2/2012
wuhuuu i love ur story. it is a sweet story from you... i felt it romantic and i love the romantic one like it. with c.j there i felt i wanted my own baby hahaha.
| mattcun chapter 21 . 1/22/2012
ice plz write more
| alexandra101 chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
| GoldenVXN chapter 21 . 11/26/2011
Awe so sweet! I just love CJ!
| JlovesGaara chapter 21 . 11/26/2011
What a spectacular story this was! I am so happy I got to read this! I also love stories with an evil Dumbledore. This is the first time I have ever read a story in which Harry and Cedric were a couple. I may check out this pairing in the future, cuz I rather liked it. This was such a sweet story and I loved how slowly you built up all the pieces from the back story of why Harry was in America in the first place. It was lovely. Well done. **Faved**
| Tassy Riddle chapter 21 . 11/9/2011
Oh, I loved!
Well, I like Cedric more, but Edward is also good! Hehe...
C.J. is so cute! I really loved the history!
| avalonchick5 chapter 21 . 10/22/2011
Love C.J., he's such an adorable character and I really like that you put Harry and Cedric together. I sort of expected Harry to have gotten a girl pregnant at the beginning but I'm really pleased you added mpreg. For any flamers, yes, I realize that this is scientifically impossible, but it's sweet and it really shows how gay couples can share intense love. :)
I also really like C.J.'s name - CEDRIC JAMES! I really, really love it. It's just such a great name - please don't ask why I'm so stuck on it, I just really like it. And that's an understatement.
Thanks for making Edward really think about some of Bella's statements - I really dislike Bella's character, and you pointed out a lot of flaws that I found. I mean, she acts like she really doesn't care about Edward killing people! If I were with Edward (though personally I prefer Harry or Cedric) I would definitely be at least a little bit bothered.
Yeah, this review is getting really long, so I'll finish up. Thanks for a great story!
| Sehaltiel chapter 21 . 10/20/2011
I know this fanfiction is pretty old but I read your story yesterday and I wanted to give my feelings about it. Oh yeah, but first, I must warn you : I'm a french guy so there might be some horrible mistakes in my review. I hope you'll understand (don't hesitate to say it if it's not the case ).
Well... ! Now, the fanfiction.
I'm not used to read things about Twilight. Sometimes, I read fanfictions about Harry Potter but that's the first time I read some crossovers of both of them. And... well, I gotta say I was surprised at how good it could be !
Yeah, I mean it : I really like your fanfic' ! You did a great job ! I loved the alternative universe you used to explain why and how Harry managed to find himself in America. The whole story with Dumbledore actually a bad guy, everything about Snape and Poppy, Cedric, and even Bella. You made everything as if it was possible, and I really loved that.
The only thing I don't really like a lot is C.J, but not because I don't like him. It's just that I don't like babies in general... Sorry '
Oh, and sometimes, I find your characters were just... a little to... "cute". But that's not a real problem. It's just me.
I wanted to congratulate you as well for the suspense you managed to keep during your story. I wanted to read more and more just to know the reasons of the name C.J, the reasons of why Harry lost all his friends, etc XD
Well, I think that's all I had to say about your story. Once more, I congratulate you for this story before leaving
P.S : I began to read this story in french... But the translation was simply horrible and it was easier to read it in english (I understand it better in english than in french XD). I'm thankful that I'm able to read english as well !
So, now's the real end of my reaview. Bye bye !