Reviews for Ashes in the Wind
Lientjuhh chapter 5 . 7/28/2009
I like it.. Well done.. :)
Johnny-on-the-spot chapter 4 . 7/27/2009
Kick Bella ASS! Poor harry..
zesty cyanide chapter 4 . 7/27/2009
what i dont get is why bella is 'scorned' if she is with jacob, then she must have chosen him over edward. unless, this is after edward left her, and besides that, nothing in the 2nd book ever happened? or sth like that

and i think harry is powerful enough to create some wards or do something to make his magic untraceable. he is quite powerful, after all.

anyways, please update soon!
Aisling-Siobhan chapter 4 . 7/27/2009
The baby is Cedric's yes? Cedric Jr...C.J.? He'd be about the right age if Harry was 16. If it was mpreg at least :P
louise2676375 chapter 4 . 7/26/2009
Good story so far! Please update soon! :)
sanityisgone chapter 4 . 7/26/2009
Great chapter
Deep and Devastating chapter 4 . 7/26/2009
..So Harry gets the gall to meet the rest of the Cullens..intersting. My only complaint is your elaboration.. I don't feel like I'm getting the whole story, just bits & pieces. :/

But I am intrigued about the fainting spell and cannot wait until the next chapter.
fifespice chapter 4 . 7/26/2009
so bellas a bitch and warning harry off she thinks shes great then and hes sat with alcie jasper and edward nice so what will happen next will he end up becoming friends with more than rose and esme
mumimeanjudy chapter 4 . 7/26/2009
Cedric Junior?
Lientjuhh chapter 4 . 7/26/2009
i like it.. well done.. :)
SPEEDIE22 chapter 4 . 7/26/2009
love this chapter! Can't wait for the next update
Erynia chapter 3 . 7/26/2009
Hi, first of, I like this story and am looking forward to the next chapter.

And then I had some question about C.J. Well, I suppose it will come up sooner or later but I am realy curious: Is he really Harry's son (it seems so) or is he Teddy (but I suppose then you would not have had any need to change the name)? And if he is Harry's then how did this happen and who is the mother?
BabyDragom123 chapter 3 . 7/26/2009
great chapter
fifespice chapter 3 . 7/25/2009
rose is so sweet and ooh hes learning wandless cool hope hes happier in america than he was before and fake potions shocking keep up the good work though
Lientjuhh chapter 3 . 7/25/2009
I like the story.. Who is the mother from C.J.? What is CJ full-name?.. Well done.. :) I like it.. :)
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