Reviews for Breathe Slow
borninthedarkness chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY! I love it so much so far.
Reithandina chapter 4 . 6/6/2010
Have you abandoned this fiction?
emmalads2 chapter 4 . 8/29/2009
i love it so much hope u write SOON
IchigoRenji chapter 4 . 8/28/2009
I love this story _
M.E.Potter chapter 4 . 8/24/2009
it's very good. i liked it alot can't wait to view more..
HiM'e'iTSu chapter 4 . 8/23/2009
I think this chapter was good, but, oh when are they doing to meet? I'll be waiting for that.

And I really like Snape comforting Narcissa:)
xxdracoLoverxx chapter 4 . 8/22/2009
Hello!

oh and thank ya for replying to my review.!

I'm not really expecting it..

Anyway! The story is cute.. but i feel weird too like harry..

I mean, Narcissa and Snape nice?

Heh.. but it isn't bad too!

It's just like a cliffhanger.. I want then to talk already!

oh well! I'll wait for the next!
blu kat chapter 4 . 8/21/2009
Spelling was good but had the wrong word usage in some places. Still addicted to your story. Thanks for the read.
bgreenwivy chapter 4 . 8/21/2009
This just keeps getting more and more interesting.
blu kat chapter 3 . 8/21/2009
A few spelling errors but nothing to serious. I want to stop reading but I can't. All the chapters so far seem to feel like there real. Maybe that's why I keep on reading. Thanks
blu kat chapter 2 . 8/21/2009
There were no blinding spelling or grammatical errors that I could see. Really wasn't going to read this chapter either but the first few sentences kept me interested. That is good writing right to do that for me. Thanks
blu kat chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
At first I was just going to skip through this chapter but I read the whole thing and now I'm interested in seeing what happens. Spelling and grammar are readable. Thanks
Alex chapter 4 . 8/21/2009
Oh yes, let us all pity the murdering Death Eater because his family is left alone after he has been jailed for his many crimes. Please! Do you even engage your brain before spouting this slop?
Alex chapter 3 . 8/21/2009
"This reminded me of all the times we had blamed Snape, basing our suspicions on him just because he was so easy to blame."

"All the times?" How about a grand total of once where they blamed Snape for something he didn't do? And it was not because he "was so easy to blame." They had plenty of reasons to think that Snape wanted to kill Harry. He hated Harry, verbally abused him every chance he got, was seen chanting when Harry's broom was being cursed, and was acting suspiciously around Quirrill. Sure they were wrong, but that doesn't mean that their reasons for suspecting Snape were not valid.
Melora chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
For further writing, you may be interested in this site:

w w w . geocities sapienti_university_of_magic (without the spaces)

It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.

Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Melora Brockert, SUM student
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