Reviews for Definition
Guest chapter 2 . 1/19/2013
I loved this story i just wish it was longer
Tata chapter 2 . 8/27/2012
More please
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xGloryHartx chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
So far, I love it. . The way you portray L seems so accurate and spot-on; I can't get enough of it. Despite his mature vocabulary, L has always struck me as naiive, innocent, I guess, which is weird, since he's probably seen his fair share of really awful things. Regardless, you capture this element of his personality very well, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Glory
Cookiesquee chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
Wow! Ive never seen L portrayed so perfectly b4! I sincerely wish u update soon, or i will sic my ninja pandas on u!
KiraYes that's my name chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
I want to read more! It's good! i feel bad for L at the end of the second chapter, though
Nardaviel chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
- “I accept your offer of friendship. We are now friends,” I say proudly. -

D'aww. So cute.

Poor L, so confused. :( Your L PoV is pretty good - a cautious but curious tone and a logical, syllogistic thought pattern. Keep it up.
rosez-have-thornz chapter 2 . 7/20/2009
huh, pretty interesting. You do a good job writting L. Update soon please! :)
2randomppl chapter 2 . 7/20/2009
this is really good! plz update soon. Maybe you could redo this chapter in Light's POV but that would probably take ages and it would be quite boring :D anyway I think you should do Light's POV in some of the following chapters! keep it up

-Monsoon o_O
deathnoteno1fan-codegeasslover chapter 2 . 7/20/2009
This sounds intresting. very poetic(at least to me) and I hope this does have a happy ending but then again this is Romance/Humor.

UP-DATE!REAL!SOON!
WinterWings chapter 2 . 7/20/2009
I really like the way you've made L so clueless.

Keep writing. I cant wait to see the next chapter.