Reviews for One False Move
galaxes the fox chapter 2 . 7/5/2016
Oooh, I see so Mich potential, plz, pleeaze continue. I finale found a story of this type that is longer than one chapter. :p
AviF chapter 2 . 2/2/2014
Looking forward to the next! Good job so far!
Agent Numbuh 227 chapter 2 . 4/28/2013
Oh so you updated this story- Can't wait to see what was next.
a fan chapter 2 . 4/28/2013
OMG an update! I am so glad to see this story was updated! I still want to know who the villain is! And the second note sounds kinda of weird. Who would write this? Does this mean the killer purposefully targeted Numbuh 213? Please update soon !
Rose chapter 2 . 4/27/2013
This was a great update! I am looking forward to who is teamed up in the mission and to see how KND actually will try and investigate this as well as the CSI team? Please update quickly!
Immortalis Cruor Elf chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
update soon!
eternal mist chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
Rose chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
I love it, so much action-pack, and it's really mysterious update now
MiDniGhtW0lF15 chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Love this story. please update soon.
robson3010 chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
i'm actually liking this story, keep going
a fan 3 chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
you forgot transmission ended :P

I love the prologue, and I have to wonder which villian would want to harm the KND so much?

That and I love the story idea :)