|Reviews for raindrops falling up|
| wanderluft chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
| Crazy Cherries chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
Why do I feel like I've read this before? I probably have. The title caught my attention and I clicked and had this weird feeling of reading this before the whole time I was reading it...
Oh well... This isn't feed back but... At least you get to read about my oddness. And how much I loved this fic. Which reminds me I have to click the favorite story box. DONE :D
Um... I've run out of things to say except for: sorry I'm not leaving some feed back.
OH WAIT, I'VE GOT SOMETHING!
Keep writing fics like this, cuz they're awesome!
That is feedback right? O.o
| Caspyr441 chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
Hi! That was such a cute story! I really love your style of writing! :)
Just for the record, it's actually really easy to die from hypothermia, depending on your stage. What you described in your story sounds more like a stage 2 hypothermia and if you can get warm soon enough, you won't die from it. That being said, hypothermia can escalate to deathly levels quite quickly if not treated. Your description on how to treat it was perfect! BODY HEAT! It really is the best and warmest way! Also really great for the plot of this story ;)
Again, you had a great little one shot here. I really enjoyed it!
| critiquing chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
I've got to say that it's hard as all hell to try and decide which of your stories are my favourite. Honestly, as a writer, you add something different to this whole realm.
Your writing style is absolutely and utterly beautiful.
You're able to say things in such little words; such succinct phrases. You make these stories alive and realistic... which many authors are unable to do. I adore this story the most because despite the painful angst and that Sakura is truly -dying-, there's a soft, soft calm. A quiet hope.
I've always absolutely loved the rejuvenation of Sasuke as a character since he was so broken, but most of all, Sakura being the catalyst for this rejuvenation.
"If we were twelve again." He stopped walking, and she had to stop too; he had her around his finger—always holding her back, always keeping her with him—"If we were twelve again, you'd go on about how we were perfect for each other and how much you loved me." And, uh, I absolutely love that. Not only because I can relate to that... but because it sounds, once again, so damn realistic.
So. I love this. And I love you.
| Sakura Bontecou Kobayashi chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
um. . .hold on. . .wait. . . who said 'i love you'? sasuke? i'm slightly confused. haha.
but still, this one-shot itself was great. so touching and sweet. :)
| ohheysugar chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
So...i sorta-maybe-kinda cried alottt on thiss.
| S-angelwings-S chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Wow, despite having a good ending, this actually made me very sad. I was devastated at the part about Ino and , I loved this, it was sad but sweet. Especially the part about Sasuke's 'confession'. Good job.
| zunaira ghazal chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
mad eme feel warm and fuzzy on the inside!
| Moldycookies Aka not logged in chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Ugh. I read this everytime and cry. You suck. Seriously, why do you make me cry? This was soooo good and I look back at some stuff I wrote and go 'ugh, and I wasn't even trying and got it.'
| Hitomi Star chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
Very nice! Very realistic too! It's nice to read your stories in order and see the changes and progressions you've gone through :)
| skidtick chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
This is really sweet.
I love the italic breaks... I guess the dots remind me of rain (as it should really heheh...)
But those are the parts of the writing that just have these awesome lines.
"you'd still love me no matter what my answer was."
"…yes, i would."
"so why does how i feel matter?"
No capitals on that part have a nice effect!
| Kristia chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
So.. I cried. A lot.
And you're the best. Yeah.
| sadbird chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw *hugs* I love you right now :D This is stunning, thank you!
| xXxPoisonedAngelxXx chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
How... I'm speechless. It's amazing
| omnimous chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
awww ] great ending