|Reviews for Fevre Dream|
| The DigitalNinjaDuelist chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
This was one the more descriptive pieces I have ever read and love the foreshadowing. Nice work
| RougeAngleofSatin chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
I meant "isn't". Where their character isn't destroyed. *facepalm*
| RougeAngleOfSatin chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
Ffrggh why have I never reviewed this before? This probably like, one of two Madara/Itachi stories where their character is completely destroyed. I LOVE THIS.
| xXSamoa. TeineXx chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
| cy-grl chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
That was intense, nice work
| Nanaki Lioness chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
I adore your characterisation of both Madara and Itachi. Wow. I think I read this before at a LJ meme? It's nice to see it here though. Thank you for sharing.
| TenshiXXX chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
((Sasuke is already dead." You have left nothing of him that can kill. "He breathes, surely, but..."
Just breathing is not living. "After all, look at you."))
HOLY SH*T! You took the words right out of my mouth, and twisted them into something aching beautiful. This is the most powerful fanfiction I have ever read. I love Itachi so much, and I can see this as a plausible scenario of how he reacted to the massacre.
| Orn chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Wow. Your story was remarkable. I hardly ever read something that actually interests me, and this defiantly passed as compelling. You write beautifully, with such detail. I also rarely find someone who can write with emotion like this - I can sort of compare our writing styles (not to say that they're the same - but somehow similar...). Only, yours seems to be intentionally choppy. You’ve somehow pulled this off and have made it wonderful to read, when it would usually stress me to no end.
Noble work. Never stop writing, ever.
| nisachara chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
Wow. I was just blown away by this story. I love how your sentences are cut up. It conveys that extra vividness... emotion... I can't really describe...
I gotta say, I really loved the ending:
"Madara laughs. Laughs-a bare, ungreased chuckle. "Sasuke is already dead." You have left nothing of him that can kill. "He breathes, surely, but..."
Just breathing is not living. "After all, look at you."
Us. Yeah, the Uchiha. Ghosts among the living.
Beautiful story! Thank you for writing it :)
| HoloXam chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
The way your sentences are cut into pieces, I love it.
| Lady Comare chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
no words It Far too Good to describe it :
| ThePepperSheep chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
Completly love how you portrayed Itachi after the massacre - I can just see him falling apart. Madara's "kindness" was also in character. Again, I love your writing style - just like in Satis, it makes the whole story flow together, making it a wonderful read.
My favorite line:
"Itachi wheels around, motions comically retarded by the mud that entombs his legs, but that hand, knuckles turning as red as the cheek they struck, remains poised at the ready."
You can just see it so vividly!
Great job, I hope you write more Itachi - Madara fics!
| JustinsDoll chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
Your writing really is a treat to read... It's done in a way that's so in-character and with such a lovely style :) I hope you'll continue writing more Itachi fics (my fave character _).
| GeishaGirl93 chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
WHY HAS NO ONE REVIEWED THIS YET! this was amazing! i enjoyed this very very much! i hope to see more from you!