Reviews for Betrayal |
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![]() ![]() ![]() *&)(&*)P(*)(P{* his *(&(*&*&) to &(*(*&)(&**)(&, he feels nothing because he feels nothing so he feels nothing. You wrote a moRon. That was male Karen territory. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why see them at all? Nothing to gain and lots to lose. |
![]() ![]() ![]() they really let the Weasleys of to easy. I hate when writers make their villains so vile a d then don’t give adequate consequences. Makes me not even want to continue this. This is months of RAPE! And NOTOk or forgivable and Molly did the same thing to Author and Harry and Hermione is going to ket that slide? Ridiculous. |
![]() ![]() Did Ron ever recover? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm forming a Hagrid protection squad who's with me |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute, but short! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please ignore my last review as you have cleared up what happened between Molly and Arthur with the love potion. If Ron was always secretly like that, then it sucks for them, but I can also see how you could have used the attack of the brains at the end of Harry's fifth year to explain his baby. One more chapter to go. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So what happened with Arthur and the love potion given by Molly? Did she continue to give him low potion was it a one-time thing? What happened with that? And Harry announced at the wedding, or maybe it was Hermione, about hearing the conversation that Molly and Ginny were having about love potioning people. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww I’m glad there was a happy ending and Ginny got to stay friends |
![]() ![]() Just wondering what had happened to Ron. Did the cognivores in the DoM mess with his faculties? It would fit the time frame. Let's hope he'll be cured. Mental trouble is no picnic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Terrific story! Thanks so much |
![]() ![]() Good story. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad. A horrible betrayal! I'm glad they found out before it was too late. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was good story. It's bad habit for people to lump Ginny with Ron and you showed how that can happen but how they should be separated. It's easy to do and I'm sure even on occasion Mrs and Mr weasely have done it because Ron is only yr older then Ginny and before that Wesley's had twins. |